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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 weeks, 1 day ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
NEXT SECTION!!!
“So, what do you think we’ll encounter in Clonabay?” Rolf asked.
“Sin and darkness,” Leon replied in a low voice.
Rolf glanced over his shoulder. “I hope Roland’s alright. I’ve seen him get hurt plenty of times, and this is about th…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Would you be okay with me moving on? I don’t need you to give instant feedback if you’re unable to keep up.
If you really need me to wait a day though then I can.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Okay…. I could wait I day.
Glad you found that interesting!!
Have you read the latest section I posted yesterday? I couldn’t tell from the feedback how far you still were. (trying to figure out how long I need to pause.)
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
Just a heads up to y’all, if KP is acting up and you don’t get tagged, I normally post a section every morning, (save Sunday) baring assassination, the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name), or an opportunity…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @Elishavet-Eloy @Keilah-h
Lets try this again
NEXT SECTION!!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
April 30th
The EmpireLeon was not arrested as we had feared, thank God. The Governor only wanted to speak with him, and the results have been unbelievable. The…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
I plan on posting another section today as usual, but since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore, I’m wondering if Y’all need me to wait a day or two? What do y’all think? I don’t want to completely lose ya.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Re-tagging Y’all. (sorry if you already got a notification) KP was acting glitchy for me this morning, and hybridlore told me the notification didn’t end up getting to her, so I thought I’d be safe.
IF YOU DIDN’T SEE IT THERE IS A NEW SECTION.
There was also a new section…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
They’re relationship is pretty solid. But there are some things that Leon really doesn’t want to talk about. (there are things that have happened to me that I don’t like to talk about unless i really, really trust the person) and I know Leon and Julian trust one another a lot, but talking about some things can be really hard. and it can…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
“Oh, it is good to be back!” Rolf exclaimed as he reclined with the others about the fire.
“How is your village?” Johannes asked as he leaned forward to stoke the blaze.
“It is doing well. The winter was a hard one and took some of…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!
YES!
Any thoughts on that?
No, they moved into the University for the winter. I mentioned it at one point, but you may have missed it. 😉
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
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Stepheroni and Cheese started the topic Rainbows, unicorns, and random questions in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 month ago
@linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @theducktator @liberty @loopylin @keilah-h @rae @hybridlore @savannah_grace2009 @theshadow @trailblazer @smiley @the_lost-journal @esther-c (Please tag other people if you want…I probably forgot someone lol)
So.
This is a very interesting topic. Why, you ask?
Because I’m about to ask you a…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
The blurb looks great! Very intriguing.
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
Nice board!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
@liberty ooooh I love those kinds of stories!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month ago
@liberty cool!!! Haven’t heard of this WIP yet, what’s it about?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Imperial Winters are not very exciting, so I’m going to try to cover the whole time in this next section. We’ll see if I can pull it off.
The fifteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
December 2nd
The EmpireEarly this morning, I wa…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
Well, I’m guessing someone is going to get thrown into a colosseum. You have five guys there…some of them are bound to get hurt…or killed. It just has to happen.
*shocked gasp* what have I ever done to my characters to make you think such dreadful things!
They technically don’t have a “Colosseum”. Just arenas and amphi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month ago
lolol.
So, any thoughts on the third section? You only mentioned the first and second.
Any guesses concerning the future?
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