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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
Okay good!!!!
Thank you so much!!!Yes, Livia is a main character now!!!!
Good, I’m glad!
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 3 days ago
@liberty and @everyone
Is there anything specific you want us looking for?
I’m not sure….
I’m just wanting to know if the plot makes sense at all, or if it’s all over the place.
In other drafts, I used to just throw the characters at you, but now I’m trying to establish them more distinctly.
So basically…I just want to know if all the…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Yeah. I probably would not know a lot about the Holocaust if I didn’t love to read–I feel like most of my knowledge about it has come from historical fiction. It makes sense that other people who don’t read wouldn’t know a ton about it.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
@liberty @jonas @highscribeofatherium @linus-smallprint @ellette-giselle
Thanks everyone!!!
You guys can use the link on my profile to read it, and then post any comments here, if that works?
What’s a reasonable deadline? There’s 19 chapters as of now, with more to come lol
It depends on how fast you can read XDXD
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freedom posted an update 1 week, 4 days ago
@ellette-giselle @koshka @keilah-h @grcr @rae @esther-c @theducktator @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12 @liberty @smiley @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else-idk-lol
Broken Shackles is officially coming January 27th, 2025💜 thank you all for your friendship, love, and continued support…it literally means the…[Read more] -
SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol
Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?
I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll
Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I know!!! But think…. if people in our country school systems and government are trying to make us forget the holocaust….. doesn’t that seems scary. Like, what might they be trying to do in the future?
Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
I know! We were just reading in Joshua last night in our family devotions about the crossing of the Jordan. One part really struck me. It was this one:
So Joshua called together the twelve men he had appointed from the Israelites, one from each tribe, and said to them, “Go over before the ark of the Lord your God into the middle of th…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Yes, it did happen, but a lot of people didn’t realize it. Most times when you say “WWII Germany” everyone else replies “Nazis”. But that’s not all the way true. Yes, there were tones of Nazis and tones of Hitler Youth and Gestapo and SS. But there were also normal people trying to survive, Christians debating weather or not to take a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Okay……. Give me a sec……….
Werner whistled cheerily as he made his way down the street and turned toward the hospital entrance. Coming inside, he mounted the stairs and stepped into the hall. Werner looked up and froze. There, about five paces away, stood an SS officer.
Werner glanced back down the stairs and shifted his…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 6 days ago
Shall I tell you, or do you want to just read the scene?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Aw. That’s sad. Thanks for tagging me!!!
@liberty @koshka (I’m guessing by your comment that you read the section posted above.)
Do you really want to know if he dies?
(That is actually not the character I killed yesterday. I killed someone else which is why the flashback was there at all.)
Any thoughts on the section?!?!
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
She did say she killed a charie this morning.
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
( @ellette-giselle Baron snippet from his POV)
I am a monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged, and had purpose, that I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in, I had to prove to him that his descision to take me in was…
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Ah, but I was hoping someone knew. *Stares dismally at the stack of 38 pages to read through*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
You have been warned.
WWII story section! Want to read some?
@esther
Werner scene!
[Werner is having a flashback]
“Werner, wait for me!”
“Come on, hurry up Wolf!”
Laughter. Someone grabbed his arm and they both spun in a cercle, waving their hands for balance.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Oh….you got me. *Falls face first into the snow*
Poor Dale. He so confused. *Pops up to offer him tea and cookies*
Also…does anybody know how many snowballs I have to write for? I’ve lost count.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Devastating Werner flashback. Want to read some?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 weeks ago
Lol!! 😂
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@freed_and_redeemed
AHHHH girl I’m so proud of you!!!!
ahhh love you girl, you’re amazing <3
Congratulations!!! That’s exciting!
Ahh!! So exciting!!! CONGRATS!!! 🥳
I’m definitely not crying rn because i’m so excited that it’s finally coming out
THAT’S SO GREAT!! I CAN’T WAIT TO READ IT!!!!!!!!
🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊🎉🥳💫✨🎊
AHHHHHH!!!!!! I CAN’T BELIEVE IT!!!!!!!! I AM SO EXCITED!!!!!…[Read more]
Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyy🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
AYYY That’s awesome! Congrats!!! Can’t wait to buy/read itttttt (hopefully)!!!
EEEEEE I can’t wait!!
HURRAH!…[Read more]
YAY! Congratulations! *Dumps several buckets of confetti everywhere*
@freed_and_redeemed I know I’m not on much but this came through my email and AHHHH I HAD TO COME AND SAY CONGRATS FREEDOM 😭 IM SRSLY SO HAPPY FOR YOU! And while I don’t read historical fiction I already knew I was gonna be buying ur books girl. I HAVE TO OF COURSE!!! I ALREADY HAVE KNOWN THE CHARRIES! THE BABIES!!! IM SO EXCITED!!!
@godlyfantasy12 you just made my day😭😭 THANK YOU SO FREAKING MUCH💜💜💜😭 And yes, they’re available on Amazon! (Freedom’s Fire is in paperback, hardback, and Ebook; Broken Shackles is only paperback and EBook) I’ll send the link in a minute 😊 and I’d love to get you a signed copy…you just gotta meet me…[Read more]
WHY DIDN’T I KNOW UR OTHER BOOK WAS PUBLISHED AHHHH WHY AM I SO FAR BEHIND IN EVERYTHING SOOOB I WOULD’VE ALREADY BOUGHT ITTTTTTTTTTT @freed_and_redeemed
Will it be available on Amazon? If not, where at? I’m a paperback girly for the most part!!!
https://www.amazon.com/stores/author/B0DCK1KQ1W?ingress=0&visitId=2927714d-a124-46ca-8776-28d237dbcfca&ccs_id=47702298-ba90-4b59-9fb4-caa7562a2333
@godlyfantasy12 there’s the link!
@freed_and_redeemed
Awesome!
@freed_and_redeemed thx! ALSO!!! U may have said this somewhere else but since idk exactly how ur running ur series…which book is the brothers in…? (MY SWEET SWEET BABIESSSSS!!! I NEEEEED MY WOLFIEEEEE AND RUEBEEEEN AND ALL MY OTHER DARLINGS)
@godlyfantasy12 haha, I get it! XD Sooo my main focus atm is Leon/Riker’s trilogy, which means all 3 novels are only Leon and Riker as POV characters.
HOWEVER, the Bois first appear in Freedom’s Fire and will also appear in Book 3 (they’re not in book 2, tho, sadly).
And I have plans for them to have their own novel eventually, it’s just more on…[Read more]
ALSO UMMM ONE DAY I WILL BE NEEDING A SIGNED COPY MAAAAAM
yoooo you’re here! how’s your writing going?
@keilah-h It’s…not really at the moment lol
lol that happens.
@savannah_grace2009 @liberty @smiley @ellette-giselle @rae @esther-c @keilah-h @koshka @theducktator @grcr Thank y’all so much😭😭💜
I LITERALLY SCREAMED WHEN I SAW THE COVER!!!
GIRL!!!!
yessss the cover is awesome.
You’re so welcome!!!!!
I’m so sorry I’m so late on this but
OH MY GOODNESS GIRL CONGRATS!!!! I AM SOOO EXCITED FOR YOU AHHHHH 🥳🥳🥳😭😭😭 SO HAPPY RNNN!!! I cannot WAIT to get Broken Shackles!!! Love you so much girl!!! <333
And someday I'll definitely have to come to one of your book signings and get a signed copy🤭
@lightoverdarkness6 No need to apologize!!!
THANK YOU SO MUCH GIRLY💜💜💜💜 I LOVE YOU MORE!!!!!
YESS and I just wanna meet you irl, soooo😂💜💜💜
@freed_and_redeemed OFCCC 🤍🤍🤍 Awww🥹
OMGOODNESS YESS 🤭🤍🤍 Same girl, I wanna meet you so bad🫶