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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic NEW and IMPROVED WIP!!!!! in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay, guys…I’m just going to start tagging everyone I can think of lol
Would anyone be interested in reading through/critiquing/giving suggestions on my WIP?
I love writing, but it’s hard to write when I’m not sure if people would even be interested in reading it or if it’s actually trash lollll
Not that I care what people think, but it…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I know!!! But think…. if people in our country school systems and government are trying to make us forget the holocaust….. doesn’t that seems scary. Like, what might they be trying to do in the future?
Okay, y’all have to see this! It is angering! This is Man On The Street. I love these, but they are…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I know! We were just reading in Joshua last night in our family devotions about the crossing of the Jordan. One part really struck me. It was this one:
So Joshua called together the twelve men he had appointed from the Israelites, one from each tribe, and said to them, “Go over before the ark of the Lord your God into the middle of th…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Yes, it did happen, but a lot of people didn’t realize it. Most times when you say “WWII Germany” everyone else replies “Nazis”. But that’s not all the way true. Yes, there were tones of Nazis and tones of Hitler Youth and Gestapo and SS. But there were also normal people trying to survive, Christians debating weather or not to take a…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Okay……. Give me a sec……….
Werner whistled cheerily as he made his way down the street and turned toward the hospital entrance. Coming inside, he mounted the stairs and stepped into the hall. Werner looked up and froze. There, about five paces away, stood an SS officer.
Werner glanced back down the stairs and shifted his…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Shall I tell you, or do you want to just read the scene?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Aw. That’s sad. Thanks for tagging me!!!
@liberty @koshka (I’m guessing by your comment that you read the section posted above.)
Do you really want to know if he dies?
(That is actually not the character I killed yesterday. I killed someone else which is why the flashback was there at all.)
Any thoughts on the section?!?!
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
She did say she killed a charie this morning.
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RAE replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
( @ellette-giselle Baron snippet from his POV)
I am a monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged, and had purpose, that I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in, I had to prove to him that his descision to take me in was…
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ah, but I was hoping someone knew. *Stares dismally at the stack of 38 pages to read through*
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
You have been warned.
WWII story section! Want to read some?
@esther
Werner scene!
[Werner is having a flashback]
“Werner, wait for me!”
“Come on, hurry up Wolf!”
Laughter. Someone grabbed his arm and they both spun in a cercle, waving their hands for balance.
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Koshka replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh….you got me. *Falls face first into the snow*
Poor Dale. He so confused. *Pops up to offer him tea and cookies*
Also…does anybody know how many snowballs I have to write for? I’ve lost count.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Devastating Werner flashback. Want to read some?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Lol!! 😂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Oh dear… I think I know who I am! *starts laughing*
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
Ok, so wait! I was going back in the history and I couldn’t find where people said that stuff! I know Power and Elishavet did, and you of course with Write or Die! but where did all the other stuff come from?
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
I LOVE it!! XD That was hilarious. I love how you took people’s actual comments and wrote them into the dialogue!
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The Ducktator replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 3 months ago
The sandwiches. I haven’t invented any fantasy food besides laka, which is some sort of fish.
Probably one of each.
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