Liberty

@Jonas

She missed your tag. ⬆️

@Liberty

i started mine on the laptop and it’s at home!! 😭

ill have to opt out of this one.

@liberty

I’m going to be able to submit something!!!!!!!

@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty

Okay, here’s the next chapter. Any critiques/thoughts would be appreciated.

Chapter 2

It was quiet. Extraordinarily quiet. The clock did not tick on Elina’s wall, the alarm on her phone did not blare, and her siblings did not come to wake her up. The only noise came from Elina h…[Read more]

@liberty

Thank you!!

@keilah-h

Indeed lol.

@hybridlore

The first three chapters are pretty short because I wasn’t too invested in them lol.

Thank you so much for the critiques, I 100% agree with all of them. I used telling in this specifically because I didn’t know what to write to make it longer, so I’ll try using the suggestions for showi…[Read more]

@liberty

Feb. 15 sounds good, thx

@liberty

Sounds good.

@liberty

That gives me time. =) I sort of forgot too, but the story is nearly finished anyway.

@liberty everyone could write a short story in two days they just don’t start until the deadline

@liberty

sounds great!! Tysm!!

@liberty @keilah-h

Thanks ladies!! I will definitely consider that!

@theducktator

Thank you!! Yes, I love it too!

@liberty I haven’t even started mine lol, I said I was gonna but I just….kept forgetting

and then I tried to make sense of the prompt and realized I had no idea what I was gonna write for that

I might skip out this time, but I’m totally looking forward to seeing everyone’s.

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Okay, little UPDATE y’all.

We had a death in the family. (don’t worry, not someone I even met before. He was on my dad’s side of the family and they’re all messed up.) Anyhow, due to craziness and the fact that my dad is the only sane person on that sid…[Read more]

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NEXT SECTION!!!

Okay…. so here is where I hit a slight problem. Leon and Julian use a very different script which is how you tell their writing apart. However, those fonts don’t transfer. So, I’ll italicize anything Julian writes, and have anything Le…[Read more]

@liberty

Yes I have. 🙂

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NEXT SECTION!!!

(Sorry, things are crazy right now. Otherwise I would have posted one yesterday too)

The next morning, Leon and Julian woke early. The two sat and read their Bibles for a time. Then Julian sat down beside Leon on the edge of his bed and…

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@liberty

Ah, so it is.

I forgot they had the same name! lol.

@liberty

Yeah, it must be the fact that I’m breaking a story trope where the wild animals always attack.

Yep! This is a German/Roman hybrid. The German just hasn’t come out much until now.

And…you created another Ernst?

Sorry?

@liberty

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Julian, run!”

Leon is still trying to gather his thoughts and figure out what Julian just jumped into…. lol.

Got that about the river.

Haha! I’ve had others complai…[Read more]

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I have a question for anyone who’s read the section I posted yesterday.