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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I have a story to submit, but it’s sort of…shifted a bit, so it doesn’t fit with the theme much anymore. Do you still want it?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Here’s my story. It’s a little short, but I hope you enjoy it!
A Summer Star Gaze
“I screwed up, Liam. Hazel hates me now.” Milly hugged her knees and placed her face on them.
Liam sighed, lying on his back and resting his hands on his stomach. Above, the moon illuminated the porch roof the two sat upon, scarce few stars shining aro…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I feel bad saying this because a couple others have said the same thing, but I can’t submit a story this time. 😭😭 School and other responsibilities took priority over writing these past couple of weeks and I wasn’t able to get much done. 😣 I’m so sorry!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m really really sorry… I wasn’t able to come up with an idea for the prompt, so I don’t have anything. 😑😓 sorry…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I’m going to be able to submit something!!!!!!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty
Okay, here’s the next chapter. Any critiques/thoughts would be appreciated.
Chapter 2
It was quiet. Extraordinarily quiet. The clock did not tick on Elina’s wall, the alarm on her phone did not blare, and her siblings did not come to wake her up. The only noise came from Elina h…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you!!
Indeed lol.
The first three chapters are pretty short because I wasn’t too invested in them lol.
Thank you so much for the critiques, I 100% agree with all of them. I used telling in this specifically because I didn’t know what to write to make it longer, so I’ll try using the suggestions for showi…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Feb. 15 sounds good, thx
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Sounds good.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
That gives me time. =) I sort of forgot too, but the story is nearly finished anyway.
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calyhuge replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@liberty everyone could write a short story in two days they just don’t start until the deadline
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
sounds great!! Tysm!!
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Thanks ladies!! I will definitely consider that!
Thank you!! Yes, I love it too!
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@liberty I haven’t even started mine lol, I said I was gonna but I just….kept forgetting
and then I tried to make sense of the prompt and realized I had no idea what I was gonna write for that
I might skip out this time, but I’m totally looking forward to seeing everyone’s.
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Esther started the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Hey guys! So I’m entering a little contest that one of my favorite magazines is doing. Basically they wanted me to finish the letter (they gave me like the first two lines) in under 250 words and they’d publish a few of the submissions they’ll receive in the next issue.
I need y’all to tear into this piece! Give me whatever feedback comes to mind…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
Okay, little UPDATE y’all.
We had a death in the family. (don’t worry, not someone I even met before. He was on my dad’s side of the family and they’re all messed up.) Anyhow, due to craziness and the fact that my dad is the only sane person on that sid…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Okay…. so here is where I hit a slight problem. Leon and Julian use a very different script which is how you tell their writing apart. However, those fonts don’t transfer. So, I’ll italicize anything Julian writes, and have anything Le…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes I have. 🙂
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
(Sorry, things are crazy right now. Otherwise I would have posted one yesterday too)
The next morning, Leon and Julian woke early. The two sat and read their Bibles for a time. Then Julian sat down beside Leon on the edge of his bed and…
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