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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
Well, I’m guessing someone is going to get thrown into a colosseum. You have five guys there…some of them are bound to get hurt…or killed. It just has to happen.
*shocked gasp* what have I ever done to my characters to make you think such dreadful things!
They technically don’t have a “Colosseum”. Just arenas and amphi…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
lolol.
So, any thoughts on the third section? You only mentioned the first and second.
Any guesses concerning the future?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
That section from Aelic reminds me so much of the “Winter King”! So far, I think his salvation story was the best! Well, there weren’t that many details concerning Roland and the others… anyway, that’s what I think.
Funny thing is, I wrote this first, so when I read that I was thinking “this sounds so much like Aelic!” LOL
I’m…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Violin would be easier to learn coming from a pianist background! But yeah, I understand if you already have too many instruments.
I will say that it’s hardest in the beginning, probably. When you are just starting out, it’s hard to get it to sound good. But if you can stick with it for a few months, it gets better. 😉
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Ahh, so exciting!! Great job!!!
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Ah, your moodbard is beautiful! You did a fantastic job! I’m curious about this fellow. Is he a protagonist?
Whatever tips I have may be irrelevant since I can see them in your work already. Basically, look for coordinating colors and moods between pictures, and play with a style until you feel like it fits the character. Also, choose…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The day passed, and the five young men explored the town. Everyone seemed to be very busy, and no one was interested in talking with them. So, the five decided to scout out the town and see what it was like. As Roland had said, the town wa…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 4 months ago
Just emailed you about this!!!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
I’m in Brookside Stories
one of the ladies emailed and said they are having tech problems at the moment. I think that’s why.
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FIREQUACKER replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
*screeches* Fiends! Thou shalt pay for this!
Ooh, that looks fun! I think I’ll join the July one.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@liberty Ellette is in Brookside Stories, I believe.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
XD Yeah, poor Dale. That was a lot of snow in his mouth at the end.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 4 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
The next morning, the four sat about the campfire and discussed their next course of action.
“So, where to now?” Roland asked.
Leon rolled up his cloak and pushed it into his rucksack. “I say we keep pushing toward the Capital and s…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
@ellette-giselle @esther-c @liberty
I guess the Chickadee tent was filled all the way, or they’re not doing it this year? I’m in Sunrise Peak
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 4 months ago
WHAT IN THE WORLD!!!
Oh you’re gonna pay for that.
If they’re tent is full up maybe we can snag one together if I join.
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 4 months ago
@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore
Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.
I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]
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