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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
WHAT IN THE WORLD!!!
Oh you’re gonna pay for that.
If they’re tent is full up maybe we can snag one together if I join.
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 1 month ago
@liberty @keilah-h @theducktator @hybridlore
Ok! So I’m not posting this as soon as I wanted, lol, but this is the almost final draft and I’d like your thoughts again if y’all are willing.
I didn’t change any of the tenses or add words because I wanted it to sound very “in the moment” if that makes sense. I did add a couple of things that hopefu…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
NEXT SECTION!!!
Sorry I’m late. Busy today. But, I think it’s a little longer than normal. 🙂
“Thank you so much for the meal, Liesl. It was wonderful,” Julian said.
Liesl smiled. “I’m glad you liked it.”
“So, what are we doing today?” Roland asked. A…
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
*sob*
There’s a small kingdom settled on the jagged crown of a snow covered mountain—a kingdom named Modorid by the people who founded it some thousand years ago. It was the only settlement for miles and miles, and most have forgotten it’s there. It is inhabited by the Modoish—jovial people with hair as white as the snow that filled their c…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 1 month ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
HELLO EVERYONE!!!! I’M BACK!!!!!!!!
I survived– barely, and am well and alive– sort of.
(Came down with a nasty cold the minute I got home. Ugh.)
Anyhow, it’s so good to be back!! I have the next section, and I may post another today as well. I hav…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
yes I know!!!
we just crossed the boarder and ate three hours away from home! I can’t wait!! -
hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 1 month ago
@everybody I’m starting to be a little scared of retaliation…
What have I done? XDOh, good xD
Yay!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@theducktator @stephie @ellette-giselle @liberty (How is your KP fanfic coming along? Have you worked on it? I eagerly await the next section) @highscribeofaetherium @whalekeeper @power @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @raxforge @rae @jonas @loopylin @esther-c @linus-smallprint
10 snowballs at each of you! That’s 500 words, and I expect to be s…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic KP GOOGLE MEET!!!!!!!!! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@mineralizedwritings (Hi! How are you? Haven’t seen you in forever!) @theducktator @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @esther-c @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle @loopylin @highscribeofaetherium @theshadow @liberty @freed_and_redeemed @kyronthearcanin @trailblazer @acancello @anyone-else-i-forgot
Hear ye, hear ye! God willing, t…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂
Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD
I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.
Thanks!
I am curious, though. How did Timon a…
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Thank you so much!!
This piece could belong to a longer story where you’d learn the two girls’ conflict with each other, but it’s written so that it’s not needed.
Funnily enough, I’m thinking of using these characters (who are characters from some of my first ever stories) in something, idk what yet though.
I love that line as well!!!…
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty
Telling y’all this now so I won’t procrastinate this week, lol.
I’m going to edit the paragraph and then repost it by Friday, taking into account your suggestions.
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Andrew replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
I started something, but then I didn’t finish it. Sorry, I’ll just skip this one.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Here it is!!!
Wind spiraled frozen fractals and reddened Lainey’s cold-kissed nose.
Every breath crystalized in frozen puffs, and she wrapped her arms around herself, shivering.
The sun sunk beneath the houses across the street, bathing the neighborhood in amber light, and Lainey hugged her knees to her chest as she watched the s…
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Here it is either way.
Cobblestones
The boy glanced warily about another smogish street before making his way across. Maribel would be here any minute now, and he needed to be here to see her safely home. That was his side of the agreement. She was always on time, always happy to share a bite of gingerbread and a laugh. His friend.
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