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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 17 hours ago
I enjoyed the ending as well…though not at first! 😂
Yeah, I knew that was probably going to be most reader’s reactions. I actually let one of my non-kp friends read it and I think it majorly confused her. XD
I love your descriptions and adjectives! Some examples: smogish, hard nailed, smutted.
Thanks!
I am curious, though. How did Timon a…
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Kefa replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
sorry I didn’t post a story 😮💨 it is due to me overcrowding my schedule! But I promise I will do whatever @savannah_grace2009 thing is!!! I do truly want to participate in this, I just have to stop procrastinating.
XD
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 8 hours ago
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 days, 14 hours ago
Thank you so much!!
This piece could belong to a longer story where you’d learn the two girls’ conflict with each other, but it’s written so that it’s not needed.
Funnily enough, I’m thinking of using these characters (who are characters from some of my first ever stories) in something, idk what yet though.
I love that line as well!!!…
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Kefa replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 2 days, 22 hours ago
@keilah-h @rae @ellette-giselle @theducktator @grcr @linus-smallprint @hybridlore@raxforge @whalekeeper @loopylin @arcticanimals @esther-c @jonas and @liberty @savannah_grace2009 @highscribeofaetherium @koshka @power@freed_and_redeemed and @thearcaneaxiom!
Hello again everyone! I have a question about some stuff today!
- What are your thoughts…
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whaley started the topic Topic of the Week…? in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 15 hours ago
So, Topic of the Week! Do we want to start it up again somehow? Please discuss here – if you want it to come back, or if you have any strong opinions about how it should be revitalized.
I’m hesitant to take Kathleen’s job. However, I have plenty of ideas of my own, and would be delighted to do it myself. If this becomes the game plan, I am eager…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Flash Fiction Critique Needed!!! in the forum Short Story Critiques 5 days, 17 hours ago
@hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator @liberty
Telling y’all this now so I won’t procrastinate this week, lol.
I’m going to edit the paragraph and then repost it by Friday, taking into account your suggestions.
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Andrew replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 days, 21 hours ago
I started something, but then I didn’t finish it. Sorry, I’ll just skip this one.
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 7 hours ago
Here it is!!!
Wind spiraled frozen fractals and reddened Lainey’s cold-kissed nose.
Every breath crystalized in frozen puffs, and she wrapped her arms around herself, shivering.
The sun sunk beneath the houses across the street, bathing the neighborhood in amber light, and Lainey hugged her knees to her chest as she watched the s…
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 7 hours ago
Here it is either way.
Cobblestones
The boy glanced warily about another smogish street before making his way across. Maribel would be here any minute now, and he needed to be here to see her safely home. That was his side of the agreement. She was always on time, always happy to share a bite of gingerbread and a laugh. His friend.
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 7 hours ago
I have a story to submit, but it’s sort of…shifted a bit, so it doesn’t fit with the theme much anymore. Do you still want it?
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 15 hours ago
Here’s my story. It’s a little short, but I hope you enjoy it!
A Summer Star Gaze
“I screwed up, Liam. Hazel hates me now.” Milly hugged her knees and placed her face on them.
Liam sighed, lying on his back and resting his hands on his stomach. Above, the moon illuminated the porch roof the two sat upon, scarce few stars shining aro…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 15 hours ago
I feel bad saying this because a couple others have said the same thing, but I can’t submit a story this time. 😭😭 School and other responsibilities took priority over writing these past couple of weeks and I wasn’t able to get much done. 😣 I’m so sorry!!
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-GRCR- replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 15 hours ago
I’m really really sorry… I wasn’t able to come up with an idea for the prompt, so I don’t have anything. 😑😓 sorry…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 6 days, 15 hours ago
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SLAYING SARAAAA ✨✨ replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 1 day ago
I’m going to be able to submit something!!!!!!!
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 2 days ago
@keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @the_lost-journal @liberty
Okay, here’s the next chapter. Any critiques/thoughts would be appreciated.
Chapter 2
It was quiet. Extraordinarily quiet. The clock did not tick on Elina’s wall, the alarm on her phone did not blare, and her siblings did not come to wake her up. The only noise came from Elina h…[Read more]
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TheShadow replied to the topic The Woods of Rosen in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
Thank you!!
Indeed lol.
The first three chapters are pretty short because I wasn’t too invested in them lol.
Thank you so much for the critiques, I 100% agree with all of them. I used telling in this specifically because I didn’t know what to write to make it longer, so I’ll try using the suggestions for showi…[Read more]
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Andrew replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Feb. 15 sounds good, thx
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TheShadow replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 5 days ago
Sounds good.
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