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Trailblazer replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Ha lol I totally forgot about this and now I’ve been snowballed again, so it looks like I’m at 200 words… fortunately for me, I did just write more than 200 words, so it looks like I can start throwing my snowballs! I’d share what I wrote, but it’s part of a random scene in a story and probably would not make sense without more of the story,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness!!! This was so, so good! I really loved this, and the time flips were amazing! I love how you did the different periods, yet had them flow together so well that at times it almost felt like the same story! Oh this was amazing. The descriptions you use were perfect and I could really picture everything! Well done!
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Girl this is so good! I love it!
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay! Just wanted to make sure you knew. 🙃
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hybridlore posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
The Mill soundtrack by Samuel Sim. It’s amazing.
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Let’s try that again. @highscribeofaetherium
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hybridlore replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@theshadow Yes, fifty words per snowball. 😉
@esther-c LOL.
@everyone (@highscribeofaetherium) I can also take snowballs now that my stock is all out . . .
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Yeah, I noticed, lol. I don’t really care too much, tbh. I mean, I trust y’all, and most KP stalkers end up as members anyway. 😂 Thanks for letting me know tho! 😊
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Also, you forgot to blur out your last name. 😬 Unless you meant to leave it in there, I just know you had blurred it out before when posting the cover. But it might not let you edit anymore.
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Yay, it’s out!! 😁
Hmm… @kyronthearcanin, @keilah-h, @jonas, and @liberty might also be interested.
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh yes, please throw some snowballs at me. I have been much too lazy with my writing lately. 💀 I need a good kick in the pants. 🥾😂
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I was too lazy to find the right emojis 😂😂
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Esther replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
Got meself me 100 words.
Now snowballs atttt…. @liberty @whalekeeper @elishavet-pidyon @koshka
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Esther replied to the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago
Welp… I wrote a short story! XD
If you have the time, I’d love to hear your thoughts on it before I show it to friends and family. (It’s kinda long, I apologize, lol. It’s under 11k.)
Tagging some folks just in case you’re interested, but don’t feel obligated to read it. :))
@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 [Read more]
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Esther started the topic Open Eyes in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 9 months ago

Open Eyes
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Amos wiped sweat off his brow with the back of his hand. He pressed against the wall of the synagogue, the stone cooling his hot skin. The voice of the priest droned on through the windows. “But you, O Bethlehem Ephrathah, who are too little to be among the clans of Judah, from you shall come forth for me one who is to be ruler in I…[Read more] -
Esther replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
We also have a new tradition where we eat a different cuisine for dinner on the three(?) nights leading up to Christmas. Like Mexican, Chinese, pizza, and then on Christmas Eve we eat finger foods so there aren’t a lot of leftovers to leave room in the fridge for left over Christmas dinner. 😋
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Esther replied to the topic Do you celebrate Christmas? in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Yes ma’am!! Similar to like a lot of people celebrate I think… We never grew up with Santa, so that’s never been a thing (we have nothing against it, of course, we just never “believed” in it as kids). We decorate our house for Christmas the day after Thanksgiving and we set up our Christmas tree (we have wayyyy too many ornaments…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Prayer Requests for Anyone in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 9 months ago
Thanks ladies!! <33
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