Liberty

@ellette-giselle

XD

Oh really? Hmm. Maybe I could at least get a very rough draft done for him.

@highscribeofaetherium

Awww!!! S0o cute!! I really like that! You do good with people! Those proportions are good!

@elishavet-pidyon

How dare you.

🤣

Nah, I haven’t killed any of them in my mind because I don’t think @freed_and_redeemed would ever actually do it.

@whalekeeper

Sure, why not.

Don’t know how active I’ll be on it. Everything in my world changes today, so we’ll see what happens.

@koshka

You WILL write Leo’s book. That is the draft you will finish.

I have decided.

@linus-smallprint

ugh. KP is grounded for bad behavior.
🤣

Question out of curiosity: How do you decide if the journal entries you share should be from either Leon or Julian? Some authors may try to give an even number for both characters, but you seem to have some sort of method for choosing them.

huh. I haven’t really thought about it. Well, I g…[Read more]

@hybridlore

oh yes Leon.

huh. I mention that a lot of what the people are eating is vegetation and wolves don’t eat that.
odd that it was confusing… 🫤

is there a better way to word it you think?

@elishavet-pidyon

yes. That is appropriate sound effects there. 😂

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

woah!! What makes you say that? 😅

lololol. I wrote this before reading those. Yes, perfect archer name.

as for Leon… we shall have to see.

@whalekeeper

Ok sounds good!

I would, but I’m focusing on writing and not editing for these next few months.

@loopylin

Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.

That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m game 🙂

@highscribeofaetherium

Aw, I love it! The colors are so cheerful and the lines are so clean… ♥️

Taking pictures of art is rough. It still looks great though!

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m hoping to actually finish a draft this summer. Just not sure which project…*glances nervously toward glowering characters*

*Whispers* I think they’re hanging up on me.

@whalekeeper

That sounds like fun! I’m not exactly sure how busy I’ll be this summer, but I’d love to join in. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy though.

Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD

Is anyone else planning on doing it?

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m working over the summer, but it’s maintenance on a campground, so I expect to have an easier schedule than I now.

@theducktator

That’s vicious. And brilliant.

… I have. O_O It was okay. XD Not worth risking Natalian citizenship.

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬

@ellette-giselle

Dun dun duuuunnnn.

Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!

Notes…

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.

This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.

…

Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

It’s digital art, which is definitely beyond me at best, so you get a gold star for that. ⭐!!

And now I can imagine him a bit better! You did a really good job capturing his character. I like it. 🙂

@liberty

Eh, he’s just 17. You can call him boy for another few years without it being weird. XD

Deductions…

He’s gentle and tender hearted. He has a strong faith in God and tries to share it with his friends, if he has any.

He loves nature and animal, especially birds. He likes to draw the world around him, and maybe has a special notebook…[Read more]