Liberty

@savannah_grace2009

It’s good! definitely a better place to start. I like it, and I like the way your characters seem better shaped.

Keep it up!

@whalekeeper

Interesting concept to have arted.

@grcr

I like his cape thingy.

@whalekeeper

*Nods seriously*

Glad I could be of any service.

*Bows*

@linus-smallprint

lol. right!

@linus-smallprint

yes, it was, and then I had another Ezra and forgot about that Ezra and it became a mess.

This was a sad scene. Was Liam a Christian? It seemed like there hadn’t been a chance to even share the gospel with him.

not that I know of. Sadly that’s often the way life works. I feel like it gets redundant if all the characters get t…[Read more]

@liberty @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @esther-c @everyone-else

I signed up!!

@loopylin

Zeke?

@hybridlore

Thanks so much for the feedback!

Oh, I’ll take a look at those sections you mentioned. Thanks!

@ellette-giselle

I love it!! I was definitely surprised, that Amelia and Joseph wanted to adopt him so soon. We didn’t really get to see Sabina’s reaction.

I just caught two typos:

Without a word, Sabina gathered him up in her arms, and Ezra laid his head against her, his eyes closing. Sabina rocked him, humming softly.

I think this is meant to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Thanks!

@whalekeeper

huh. interesting.

I might have to look into that.

Thanks!!

@whalekeeper

is there a free version?

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

NEXT SECTION

It was night, and Joseph sat in Liam’s bedroom keeping watch. Sabina sat at the bed, stroking the boy’s head. Joseph had told her about Beric’s acceptance of Christ, but not the full story. She was already worried, and he felt now was not the time…

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@liberty

I really like this picture!!! So good!

Congrats on the win!

I’m glad Power judged because I wouldn’t have been able to submit anything today. With Christmas right around the corner I’m swamped!

@whalekeeper

That is so cool!

*Goes to look it up.*

@theducktator

Thank you!

@highscribeofaetherium

Fantastic idea!

*Slides in behind the others*

Prompts.

• It was over, and that terrified me.
• Bring me back, dead or alive. Please.
• It all began with a stuffed bunny.
• Imagine a world where children are invisible except to their parents until they reach an “age of visibility.”

@whalekeeper

I had to manually go in and change a lot of things because I wanted only parts of some of the pictures to be colored.

How did you do that? I must know!

@whalekeeper     @koshka

(We can head back to school in the morning/whenever. Rory needs to be Leo’s assistant, right? Or are the two going their separate ways?)

Rory

Rory just lay there, listening to the steps. He felt himself go ridged out of instinct, but he didn’t run. Someone got down beside him and Rory closed his eyes, waiting for the…[Read more]

@liberty

Okay I’ll try to get one done tomorrow.

@loopylin

Good question! It’s been a while. Here’s a revamp of his old intro.

Viktor

Life is a confusing thing. When it gets turned upside down, it’s even more so. One moment you’re a young refugee in a foster system, and then the next you’ve been given a dream, a hope, and a nightmare all in one.

Basically what happens when you find your…[Read more]