Liberty

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! Shall be looking forward to comments!

@linus-smallprint

try THAT.

https://1drv.ms/w/c/9ff685038eab87a7/ET6rrEZ5XvJHv-1rHGwycOMBuh5U4QkPLaT031-tmVn-qQ?e=1Dlg54

Sector 5 The Hidden.docx

Odd.

That wasn’t a link at all.

@linus-smallprint

Uh… hmm. Idk how to add people in….

I’ll try reposting the link and if you can’t get in then I guess I’ll try to figure something out…….

Sector 5 The Hidden.docx

Try that. You may need to sign in…..

@loopylin

YAY!

*poofs off to find project*

@whalekeeper @loopylin

Ah! It’s Hugo! (Hi, Whaley.)

Also… Why does Viktor grin so much… I need more expressions to express a cheerful nature without sounding like a brainless lunatic. XD

Viktor

Imaginary friends, sisters, and… Corpse Crystal? That felt like an insult to the lovely color on his plate, although the mineral itself was less…[Read more]

@rae

Ah! Happy Birthday!! I’m so glad you had a blast! It sounds like a fun day.

That cheesecake place looks amazing. Now I want to go to Connecticut. XD

@loopylin

Hey, would you still be up for doing this in the next month or so? I realize I never got around to writing/sending you a story.

I was writing one that would go in the “Appendix” for Portals: When My Story Ate Me. I just didn’t feel like it was really coming home. I realize now that I rely a bit too much on the reader’s ability to read…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Wow. That’s a way to do it. XD There’s some neat stuff in there.

@loopylin

Hmmm… *Note* I made up a mineral since I couldn’t find one that fit the description.

Viktor

A little sister problem then. Viktor squinted though his dusty goggles at his partner. He wouldn’t want to pry, but Lois had been nice, friendly. He deserved the same in return.

“OK. If you want to talk about it though, I don’t mind. Maybe…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

Haha!!! I literally had nothing to do for three days in the car. I read everything in the art section, everything in the general writing section. XD

@ellette-giselle

Ack! Thou snoop of the KP annals, why hast thou resurrected mine art? XD

Thank you. I’m glad you like my art. This specific piece still makes me happy, although now the mistakes seem so obvious. I won’t point them out, though. I like flattery. You’re welcome. 😉

@loopylin

This is a great question! Now I have to think… and think…

Dalton: Primary=Fight. Secondary=freeze He’s a warrior, but also a squirrel. Some things never change. This does come in handy though, since most of the others have fight pretty low down on their instincts.

Viktor: Primary=Flight. Secondary=Fight. Pretty standard. He’s…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Ok thank you!!

I was thinking there needed to be more family interaction too. I’m glad you caught that. Is there a certain spot on the book that you think those types of scenes would fit best? (If not, that’s fine)

Ok yes!! I will for sure do that! It will be fun for me to take time to flesh out the characters individually…[Read more]

@grcr @savannah_grace2009

Thank you girls so much for reading through my book and supporting me!! 💕💕 I so so so appreciate you! ❤️

Your comments have given me a lot more confidence in the plot and characters, which I definitely needed going into a third draft.

Are there any scenes you’d like to see added? Or characters you’d like to see mor…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Someone suggested I cut the last section of the blurb and leave it with the part about Jonathan’s friendship because it has more of a cliffhanger. What do you think?

@whalekeeper

On here works great!

Also, any thoughts on the book cover?

@keilah-h

also mmm, I love cheesecake.

Why do I feel like Sniper would like cheesecake? XD. I don’t know, I can just picture him denying that he enjoys it.

@loopylin @theducktator @hybridlore @ellette-giselle @keilah

Thanks everyone!

@grcr

*Gaspeth!!!*

What have you done!!!

🤣

Well, there goes that. XD