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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Ooo, that chapter was very well written. I was feeling very tense, even though I knew what was going to happen. lol.
Yeah, Tyn is in a good position. Have her do it. This will be so, so bad for Eric. Plus, Tyn is in a bad mood, so she may even scold him.
I have never met a guy that didn’t absolutely hate it when a girl scolded him.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yup, it’s Eric. (How did you know?)
um…. because it was obvious since Martha got captured that he was a liability, and by the chapter you just wrote I knew he was going to get caught or alert the soldiers or something. (I may overstudy literary patterns.)
Sooo, maybe I’m blind, but I’m not seeing the problem……….. w…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
It occurs to me that Sabina and Julian are similar. Both have a brother who became a Christian, and they both thought he had gone crazy, which made them resistant to hearing the gospel and angry at whoever shared it with their brother. So I’m wondering if Sabina is going to recall how she acted and how this may impact her i…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Did you draw all of these?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Why does it have to be such a specific way?
Magic potato, havoc potato, what potato am I?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle I’ll tag you and respond to that post somewhere else!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
oh my goodness.
Are you serious?
We can move this conversation to a new forum I guess.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
I write a very wide variety of things.My dystopian stuff is me being a conspiracy theorist.
This one is about a young farmer living in a country that faced Civil War plus a 3rd Word War. The country was split in half and the East in uninhabitable and forbidden, and the West is under dictatorship. The idea of family has been…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
@linus-smallprint LOL.
Really?! I didn’t know you wrote dystopian! What’s it about?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Okay! Which novel are you working on?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
uhu. We’ll see about that.
I’m currently trying to wrap up another novel, but I may post more later. If not, maybe Monday morning.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
See, if I have your characters, I don’t think you can keep writing away. They’re mine now. Even Adrian. 😁
Just kidding. Keep writing. I need the next sections.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh no. I will not change my mind.
So I’ll just keep writing away, but if the protection squad activates then I’ll deal with it. lolololol.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Too late, they’ve been stolen. xD
Lol. It surprisingly let me.
Too bad you didn’t know about this before.
Now you’re too late to save Adrian.
BRAWWWWWHAAAAAH
Hey, the book hasn’t been published yet, right? 😆 There’s still time to change your mind!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Too bad you didn’t know about this before.
Now you’re too late to save Adrian.
BRAWWWWWHAAAAAH
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Hunger Games (Inspired by YWW) in the forum Genre-Writing 1 year, 10 months ago
@whalekeeper Could you tag me when you post the next sections? I don’t have a character in this but I still enjoyed reading it. 😊
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