Liberty

@hybridlore

Praying for you!! 🙏🏻 💕

@hybridlore
@keilah-h

okay!! Thanks for the suggestions!! I’ll rework a few scenes.

@liberty

oh man. I have had some of the WORST sprains ever!! One took almost two months to heal!
Roland’s is not as severe, and he has been off of it for four days and as you can see he starts limping when they travel again.

Oooh! I love Dian!

you just love sailor characters. 😝

Is that why you like him? Or for other reasons too?

As for what w…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Yeah, that would be a cool scene! I’ll have to try to see if I can fit something like that into the story.

@theshadow

Okay, great! 😊

@godlyfantasy12

Ohhh, I’m kind of in a similar position as I’m writing the second draft of a WIP. I’m keeping some scenes, shuffling some around, and adding new ones. It’s been a fun juggling act 🥴😂

I don’t know how much of a plotter you are, but having a big picture idea of your plot is going to be super helpful. You don’t necessarily…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Sorry, didn’t get tagged yesterday. I think Linus has a valid concern about the scene with Julian and Dian, but moving the scene where Julian shares the Gospel with him to a day or so later would fix it, in my opinion.

I think it was nice to see Julian argue with God a little bit. It’s slightly a different reaction than you…[Read more]

@theshadow

NICE!!

I really like it! I had hopes for Dylan and they seem to be coming through! Yay!!

@keilah-h    @linus-smallprint

So, keilah likes the scene that you have a problem with, linus! This is great. 🤣

Here’s an idea. What if I shift it a little so that the conversation happened a day or two after they had already been on the ship? Do you think that would work?

@theshadow
Thank you! 🥰

I would appreciate it if you guys could pray for me! My OCD’s been worse lately, and I’ve been feeling depressed some days. Just pray for healing for my OCD and that God would help me lean on Him and grow closer to Him.

@theshadow

Yay! It looks good! 😊 Looking forward to the next one!

@keilah-h

So you like it? You think i should keep it?

@linus-smallprint

I have also considered making up a world with my friends and doing our own fantasy RPG in it.

Hey, that could be interesting!

Yikes! That’s scary

yeah. No kidding.

@linus-smallprint

aaannnddd I may have overrated. I just….. yeah, I have opinions about that game.

@linus-smallprint

NO!!! No don’t do D&D. My two of my mom’s guy friends were killed through that game when she was a teenager.

I mean, you can do it with you want, but I’d really look into the history of that game. I know I’m asking for it, but that game originally had a lot of demonic attachments, and it’s something I’ve always steered clear of…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Yeah that would work!

@linus-smallprint

Julian is certainly a blame others type, considering his reaction to Adrian’s death. Leon, I’m not so sure about it.

Yes, very much so.

I’m not really sure either. He’s somewhere in the middle honestly.

No. We still have it, though we haven’t played it for a while. We just ignore the story when we do play it.

Ah, one of those…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

he’ll go doggedly on.

I was stunned for almost a week and didn’t think clearly.

(again, different person. But trauma does weird things)

@raxforge

Oh my word.

Why are all your characters so messed up?!?!

(quickly hides Rory because he’s totally not messed up)

😂😝