Liberty

@linus-smallprint

Lol, does this help.

Ardentan Royal Guard

It’s medieval. Very medieval.

I’ll post some more tomorrow! Thanks for the feedback, I love it!

@freed_and_redeemed

I love the pinterest page!! Great job!

OK, you guys had GREAT feedback! This is just what I needed.

Ok, the blurb on the back…… I am HORRIBLE AT WRITING THOSE!!! I can NEVER EVER write a good one! I hate it when they spoil the story, but I also want them to sound interesting. If anyone is good at writing…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Yay!! I love it!!

@esther-c @mineralizedwritings @rae @savannah_grace2009 @smiley @keilah-h @ellette-giselle @koshka @grcr @theducktator @highscribeofaetherium @anyone-else-idk-lol

I (finally) made a Pinterest account! Even if y’all don’t have Pinterest, you can check it out here(just delete the space after the h; I know KP doesn’t like links, so😂):

h…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So, on the front cover, I agree that the title feels a little cramped. Maybe enlarge it a little and move your name to the bottom?

Also, I would remove the “By:” and just put your name. In my opinion, it feels more professional, but it’s up to you if you like that version more.

The cover illustration is beautiful!

On the back,…[Read more]

I tagged myself, didn’t I?

@keilah-h sorry, my rp is up there

@theshadow @rae

Silvanis

Trevor drew his knives, ready for the creature to make its move. Silvanis watched Fairy closely as she slowly positioned herself at an angle where she could hit the creature, a strange sly smile crossing her face. As the beast ran for Trevor, Fairy ran towards it. Silvanis was shocked at the move. Fairy was going to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

So pretty!! I love the soft shimmery feel of your cover.

My only critique on the cover is that the words feel a little crowded and off balance, like they were shoved into the top of the picture. I might move your name to the bottom of the page, enlarge the words, and drop them down a little bit. Maybe even flip one or both of…[Read more]

*considers what characters I should have drawn next…*

@ellette-giselle

I’ll try my best to read through your WIP, but I can’t make any promises since I’m also helping two other people with their stories. (:

@hybridlore

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

I’ll take an critiques you have. (I just may not use them if I don’t agree. lol.) But yeah, critique away! That’s why I showed y’all!

@ellette-giselle

That is so cool!!

@esther-c

Yes! I overlaid a pen drawing onto a water color background, tweaked a few things with the design program, and there it is! I designed the publishing logo as well!

@ellette-giselle

It sounds really cool! Are you looking for format critiques, or is it too late for that?

@theducktator

I look at it briefly in the beginning and sometimes go back to look at it. It honestly just depends. Like, I love the maps in the Wingfeather Saga, but in some other books, I don’t enjoy looking at the maps as much, lol.

@ellette-giselle

It looks so good!! Did you design it yourself?

I love that I can only do one image at a time. grrrrrr

@koshka

Ok, here are the back and front covers of my book!

@ellette-giselle

Sure! I love book covers and might be constantly redesigning my working covers to a point that it’s probably bad for my health.XD

Blurb away!