Liberty

@keilah-h

Um no. Oh wait, I can’t say that ’cause it’s Monday. 🙁 lol.

Well, It’s Monday! I’m ready!!! Shoot!

@princesachronicle22 @hybridlore @grcr @koshka

Ok. Wow, I’m off for one day and the whole world tags me. You should see my inbox!!! lol. Ok, because I don’t want to go back and weed through who said what, I’m just tagging y’all who tagged me and replying to the world in general.

So, for the cover, it looks like I’ll be doing style seven.…[Read more]

@loopylin @whalekeeper @savannah_grace2009

I blame all of you for the lack of sleep last night XD. Seriously, what Loopy said had me thinking.

I understand your concerns, but as of now, I’m not going to change anything with Chase and just keep him going on the path I have laid so far. The reason is there’s something different in Chase. I haven’t…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Sure! Come join us!

@ellette-giselle

Welcome to the Kingdom of Pen!

I know this is an exceptionally late ambush, but when you asked what we did on here other than ambush newbies, I realized this is one thing I haven’t done in a while. And as you love Peter Pevensie (from the BOOKS), and Smalden, draw beautifully, and like skirts, I feel an unavoidable obligation to…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

I like number 7 best I think. The title feels like it is part of the picture.

Jonathan, you reckless, courageous, foolish kid. What did you think you were doing? (I think you’d get a long just fine with Vulkasin to the rest of the world’s danger)

@rae

Aww, I loved it!!

The only thing I’d recommend is to really deepen Chase’s pov, especially after he gives up his sight. Because it still felt like he could see with the way things were described. I think if you describe it in the way in which Chase was experiencing it, then it will have a much bigger impact.

Other than that it was good! (:

@whalekeeper

I feel like the blindness bit was too much? I mean for Chase to give up his sight as well as his mobility. It’s too on-the-nose for Chase’s character, since he often gets marked with physical things like scars, stuttering, and the mobility thing. I felt less sorry for him, and more “oh okay that happened.”Idk, it felt like waaaaay…

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@freed_and_redeemed @savannah_grace2009 I have a Chase scene for you

@whalekeeper @loopylin @grcr @theducktator @esther-c @kielah-h @theshadow @ellette-giselle @anyone

I have a really sweet but sad Chase scene. For context, this is after Chase’s last battle with Narsa Jeptune.

oh, and beware, I’ve barely edited this. Criticism welcome 🙂

Chase…

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@theducktator

6 or 7

@ellette-giselle

If you want to share your plot outline and story details, I could try to help you with a blurb!

@ellette-giselle

6 or 7!

@loopylin

AWESOME!! Thank you so much!

Could you Dominic?

He is 16 years old, slender, lighter skin tone, has black hair and dark eyes. He’s a guy ballet dancer. (I’ll attach a picture of the kind of outfit he’d wear.) He can be really funny and chipper, but also really quiet and serious. Depending on the situation. He is trying to escape from…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Looks like it might be seven!

Anyone else?

@highscribeofaetherium

Nice, that’s two votes for 7.

@loopylin

Howdy Loopy,

Are you still drawing characters, or are you taking a break?

@esther-c

Thanks! The feedback is super helpful!

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, that makes more sense. It just didn’t come across like that to me when I read it.

Maybe you could reword it, but yeah. I didn’t find the base concept cringe at all.

Yes, I would completely agree there.

@ellette-giselle

1, 2, and 7 are my favorites.