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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
oh yes!!! Much better! That makes far more sense.
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
Ah, I see. How is this?
“An elf lord who employs orcs.” he straightened to face Travenor. They stared at each other for a long moment while the rest of us stood in suspense. Well, not me. I knew.
“For the love of life!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was him.”…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 3 hours ago
haha!!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
It’s not so much the words as Onnendel’s reaction. Or the way it was written. If yoy could do this:
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him.”
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 3 hours ago
Awesome!!!!
STOP!!!!!!! Have you eaten Breakfast???
lol. No. I don’t do that until closer to 2:00 in the afternoon………………….
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 3 hours ago
Yeah……… unless I do it to Werner.
Also, HUSH! Don’t blow my cover!
I refer to you two as the twins because you’re the only twins I know and…. idk. It’s easier because not everyone knows your real names, and I’d end up slipping and saying them instead of your KP names, so I just call you the twins.
As for Power,…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 3 hours ago
Yeah, I get what you both are saying. I feel like church should be a place where you gather with your family (brothers and sisters in Christ) and if church is leaving you wanting more….. I don’t know. For some reason that feels wrong to me. Maybe not. Maybe I’m just so used to my church that it’s hard to see things d…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 4 hours ago
Erm…….he probably thinks that’s great…..
*Whips around towards door and screams*
Ellette, what have you been saying?!
XD
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Let's Laugh! Writing Memes in the forum Art 1 day, 16 hours ago
(I’m only gone foe a few days, and suddenly people are changing their usernames and profile pictures all at once. How am I supposed to know who’s who anymore?)
You look at tags. Those never change.
I think I’m partly to blame for this. I changed my name to a silly nickname of mine, then Andrew changed his, and then other peo…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 day, 16 hours ago
Your senses were correct! This is a redemption story.
Small note on the next story, it was originally began for the short story prompt “a story of a scar” but never finished as such for it sparked the entire Baron Chronicles actually being written, and the story behind Baron’s scar has already been revealed so I had to…[Read more]
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Ruee Hamster Huey replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 16 hours ago
Wow, name-changing is becoming a tread.
Tsk, tsk. No self-deprecation allowed on this topic.
Now you sound like Andrew lol
Does Chase have the element of Creatures? After all, he is the ultimate ✨Disney Princess✨!
I have that meme saved somewhere…
Yes, he’s actually the reason that element came to be. He’s also the reason I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 18 hours ago
Apparently my feet changed that, which meant my story was changing itself. A terrifying thought indeed.
Dun … dun… DUN!!! XD
Nice segment. Interested to see where it goes next…
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Koshka replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 20 hours ago
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 21 hours ago
I don’t remember hearing about your church on the news (I’ve watched news streams that have included some news from Canada) but I remember hearing about Artur Pawlowski and his church. And then in ’22 of course I heard about the Freedom Convoy and that was super exciting to see so many people taking a stand for…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
Also….
Why would Onnendel be sending orcs to hunt his own band? And then give himself away by a notable device on his minions’ uniforms?
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Koshka replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
OOOOOOPS. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun. How is this?
“Him!” Travenor spun to kick the body again, eyes flashing steel grey. He stepped across to Onnendel. “It was Him. Bân-Sercëon.” He spat out the name in a half-voiced growl.
Onnendel did not move. He simply gazed at Travenor with his clouded eyes and a gravity that ache…
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 day, 21 hours ago
What? XD Oh no. I’ll tweak that. Sorry for the unclarified pronoun.
Onnendel is not the traitor. It would be a great twist, but he’s too much of Aenwest’s cinnamon roll to have a negative arc..
Plus… Backstory. Lots of backstory….
They’ll talk more about that in the next two chapters.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 22 hours ago
or you could gather the kids and play a game with them. I used to do that all the time when they were younger.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 22 hours ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 day, 22 hours ago
yeah, well have you tried talking with the women, or even sitting and listening to the adults talk?
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