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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
😊 Maketh my heart gladeth.
Does it fit how you pictured him? The plushie is yet unclaimed.
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Not sure. Maybe because he’s a guardian type, protecting his younger brother. Maybe because he reminds me of a centurion, and I always loved the centurions in the Bible. He doesn’t understand everything, but he has a strong sense of honor.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
@ellette-giselle Oops, I didn’t see your post.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Thank you! I like Julian too. Though it’s really funny that he’s the character that you like. lol.
May I ask why?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
It’s okay, no one is going to hate you. Ellette wasn’t being serious about really kicking you off KP, and like she said, it’s hard to tell online whether someone is joking or not. I understand that you have a lot going on, but I think you over reacted. If you are hurt by something that someone says, maybe try to clarify what…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I LOVE THE aesthetic!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
I… I don’t know what to say.
First off, I can hardly see what I’m doing because I’m crying so hard. I don’t understand why you seem to be so out to get me or…. or something! At first I thought you were just a very funny, joking type person. I was only trying to play along.
I called you “little buddy” because that’s what I…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Aha!
*pulls on gloves*
*Grabs gold pen*
Lisa was looking for that. You don’t want her looking for you instead!
*Looks around*
Oooo, nice story, Ellette. I like Julian.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Lolol. And yeah, I can see what Koshka is saying, but that wasn’t really what I was thinking while I read it. I thought the scene was great.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
I will post a character aesthetic, though. It has a bit of the backstory woven in, so I won’t be specific, but see if you can guess who it is! (I say like it’s not painfully obvious.) Whoever gets it right gets an imaginary plushie of this character OR his horse!

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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
I guess I’m a “Wow -_-” potato!!!!!!
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Ruth posted an update 1 year, 9 months ago
@the_lost-journal Didn’t want to ask this in a place I couldn’t delete it. Are you okay?
I understand if you don’t want to talk about something online to a stranger, but I just wanted to make sure everything’s alright.
I have had family problems for a while now, and I know it can really hurt, and make you store emotions up inside that you then…[Read more] -
Ruth replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Sorry, didn’t see your post when I made mine
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Good. That’s what I assumed was happening.
The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later.
I’m afraid I was more concerned over the emotional/psychological aspect, but I suppose that’s kinda what you meant.
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*Cackles*
Oh, and I wasn’t sad. I was almost angry. Slightly mad. Highly miffed. And rather sorry for…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Okay, calm down.
Sit down, relax, take in a breath slowly and exhale. Believe me, doing this a few times helps a lot.
Firstly, I can’t speak for @ellette-giselle but about kicking you off KP, I was not serious.
Secondly, I apologize for not understanding this topic when it is really obvious now that I look at it. Andrew…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Portals: When My Story Ate Me in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 9 months ago
@koshka @ellette-giselle @hybridlore @keilah-h @theducktator
Mae Govenen! Thank ya’ll for your feedback. And I will especially thank you for tactfully reminding me to post the extra that fateful Thursday.
As we all know, the extra was not posted.
Fear not, nevertheless! Although we have not posted chapters, we have been writing them. And…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
Oh I don’t think Sabina solved the long term problem either.
I think she is tired and stressed and just about at the braking point, and she doesn’t know what else to do beyond keeping the household from falling apart.
The emotional/spiritual aspect will be addressed later. She was just trying to find some way to keep the peace for the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
It’s Eric, I’m guessing.
Hmmm, can you get him captured without Alan knowing about it? That seems like the easiest way out.
Other then that, you could get him rescued easily if….. idk….. Stripe comes and knocks the guy out while Alan distracts him. Or something of that sort. Eric would still feel really stupid and useless…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 9 months ago
Well hey there little buddy. Tagging me several times in one post is not nice either, because then you spam the mess out of my email and it crashes.
So, don’t do that.
On a more serious note, I’m not sure if you’re joking or not about your family and about some of us not being Christians. Online chats are hard because you…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 9 months ago
*Glares*
You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.
*Huffs*
*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*
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As to the last section…
This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]
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