Liberty

@ellette-giselle

I like it a lot! The only things I noticed were that you included the long excerpt from the Bible again… most readers already know the Christmas story so I don’t think you need it in there. Then, also, when Amelia was talking about Mary, some of the tenses seemed wrong. Like, maybe it should be in past tense? Idk. And last thi…[Read more]

@hybridlore   @linus-smallprint    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @grcr

Okay Linus, I put that part in that you suggested. I plan on having it just after Stephen and David bring their friends, and I left part of that in this section so you can get the flow. I hope this fixes the problem you mentioned.

Thoughts Anyone?

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@liberty

Thank you. I love to draw. 🙂

See ya! Looking forward to your reply!

@liberty

We sure do!!!!

Here’s the back to The Crimson Rose.

I’d love feedback on the blurb. I want it to catch your attention, but not give too much away. Here you go.

 
Three Stories. One War. One Faith.
In the shadow of World War II, Josef faces a terrible choice. Desperate to avoid the inevitable conscription to the Eastern Front,…[Read more]

@liberty

This one is The Choices We Made

I drew the picture and laid it over a blue background.

@liberty

here’s the cover for Fateful Night

@liberty

Oh cool! Thank you!I’ll have to check that out! I love older cartoons. Like the Tintin TV series, or Liberty’s Kids, etc. It looks like the art they did for the animal Robbin Hood!

Nope, this isn’t Fateful Night, cause that’s already written and published.

This is my newest WIP called The Crimson Rose.

@liberty

what do you think of the story section? as interesting as Friedrich?

Wait……. redwall got made into a movie!?

@liberty

I’m back. Here you go.

                  Reuven’s hand was shaking, so he dropped it into his lap. Opening his book, he let his eyes trail over the pages of Latin verbs. He had faithfully continued to study, even after leaving university, and he knew these words by heart. Still, he forced himself to read over them slowly and careful…

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@liberty

Oh, yes, Friedrich is from TCWM

@liberty

Everyone knows Flint. Everyone in that town knows everyone. It’s a very funny movie. You should watch it. We watched it one night when we were moving house. We had been working since sunup and it was close to twelve. Everyone had been in tears once that day, all the packing tape was gone, and dad was like, “Okay, I’m ordering pizza and…[Read more]

@liberty

liberty!!! I’ve been waiting all morning for your email. I love to talk people silly with this sort of thing, and no one else really likes to listen. lol.

Okay, the word count is…….

Fateful Night–> 90,923

The Choices We Made–> 888,823

Oh that’s so cool that you have your sister to help you!! No, I haven’t heard of InD…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

We need a “pin post” option.

@jonas

That definitely makes sense. When there’s one big group, it’s kind of hard to RP. I’m up for it.

@hybridlore

I know right! To bad you didn’t post it at the beginning.

@ellette-giselle Haha I use my phone a good amount of the time. 🤪 It does take some getting used to.

Lolol, that should be the official video of the forum. 😆

@liberty

Oh, you won’t be getting any more of Friedrich. That book has been published, and I wrote that scene because I was thinking of Friedrich. If you want to read more you have to buy it.

You might get a little of other things though.

Um. Yes I would. That’s what I’m doing on here. I’m pelting y’all with snowballs and I don’t even know…[Read more]

@hybridlore  @loopylin   @theshadow   @keilah-h   @rae   @linus-smallprint   @whalekeeper  @theducktator  @esther-c  @liberty

Is it bad that this scene came to mind and I smiled with evil glee?

@hybridlore

whoops. Yes, I did.

Using a phone for KP is not the best.

@savannah_grace2009  @esther-c  @rae

Can I bring the Agents back?

Please!

🙂