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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
like I don’t know why but it’s like a huge green flag if a guy is an amazing older brother to his siblings
SAME!!!! I am not interested in a potential suitor if he isn’t good with younger siblings/younger kids!
yeah I’m not sure I could ever envy you but I mean God puts us where he puts us and He thought you must be right for the r…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I’m a 9:00PM in bed, 5:00Am up and at em sort of person.
Mornings are the best!!!
What made you think I’m a morning person?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Well….. I’m also an author, and there are only two kinds of authors: “those who are insane, and those who are good at hiding it”
Soooo….. I may have proved them right. XD
Honestly, being the oldest can be tough! I always, always wanted an older brother. I pick older brothers out of books to be my fictional older brothers and…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Hello! I’m Ellette!
I think I’ve seen a few of your things while stocking KP before I became a member.
I guess I’ll introduce myself.
I’m a homeschool Senior. I’m reformed Baptist/Covenantor
I’m the oldest in my family.
I write Novels and Short stories, (I do some songs and poems, but they are generally for my story) I write fiction…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Hey!!! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Miley!! You’re back!!!
You just started a new series?? I want to hear about it! And I get the cringy old stuff thing. It’s weird to see posts that you wrote, like, two years ago still on here. 😬
What’s new with you?
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
btw, I’m surprised the protection squad isn’t out in full force yet.
I guess Koshka and Elishiavet are behind.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Lol 😂 As long as he doesn’t read the posts in between.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Yes, I am interested in what he says. It may just be a girl thing to catch stuff like that and it might go right over his head.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hmm. I’m not sure. I think that definitely raised it to the front of my mind, but honestly, in the beginning I might have still been a little suspicious (I usually am when young married woman aren’t feeling well, because that’s usually the author trying to be sneaky lol.)
I sort of accepted that your “Hmm, that would be.” me…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay, so I have a question. Would you have still called it if Amelia hadn’t brought up wanting a baby in the letter to Sabina?
Did you call it the whole time, or was there any point that you actually thought she was sick.
Should I cut out the baby part in the letter to make this scene more stressful, or no?
Oh boy… this is n…
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Hah!! I called it!!
There were a whole lot of hysterics in that scene, but I guess I get where it was coming from. Joseph is so sweet to Amelia.
Oh boy… this is not good for the Cadwicks. Or Amelia and Joseph. 😬
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hybridlore replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @grcr
12/28/24
Section 1.
(hopefully that will make it easier for anyone behind to organize these parts.) 😉
if this section was too long, then I can cut them down. Just let me know.
NEXT SECTION
The next morning, Joseph awoke to the banging of the back do…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
This is good! I like this scene!
Wait, hang on……. you got him stuck there and now you don’t know what to do?!?!
Haha…… I may or may not have done that to a character before………
Honestly, George doesn’t seem very stable at the moment, If Riker gets out of the room and George follows and trips over something…[Read more]
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freedom replied to the topic Snowball Fight! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
Gotcha. Wow. It’s so sad writing about villains…especially their background. Does…*gulp* Hans have any redemption later on? *hopeful eyes*
I’m afraid not 😔
What @ellette-giselle said about him having several chances and accepting none of them is correct
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 8 months ago
@ellette-giselle @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @mineralizedwritings @theducktator @grcr @anyone-else
Not quite sure where to take this scene after where it ends, so if anyone has any ideas, pls let me know😅
a scene snippet from Book #3 🤫 I didn’t realize these characters I spontaneously came up with would play a bigger role in…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
You’re very welcome.
Also, why does that racoon picture have an expression that so fits what I know of you? lolololol.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
I have the same thought as Hybrid here. Beric has not only been independent for a while now, but he is also a teen. I’m glad you included the scene of his struggle to listen.
Thanks. It actually wasn’t in the first or second draft. I had a reference made to it in the third, but I thought I should flush it out into a full s…[Read more]
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