Liberty

@linus-smallprint

I don’t even know what to say!

THAT IS INCREDIBLE!

That is so, so cool!!!!

WOW!!! I think that’s the best thing you have ever drawn that you’ve posted on here! WOW!!!

@theducktator   @linus-smallprint

My thoughts are not that a reader will be tempted to use magic. It’s just the fact of putting those images in their mind. Same as why we don’t write super graphic scenes or Rated R type scenes. It’s not that we’re worried the readers will graphically kill someone or commit adultery if they read it, it’s the f…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Oh, I almost forgot!

That section you just read has some HUGE changes for Joseph. What are your thoughts on where he has just arrived spiritually? Any thoughts on the connections he’s starting to make and the fact that he’s seeing the truth?

@linus-smallprint

Woah! You hit me with a lot. *goes and re-reads sections to see where you are*

Okay.

When Amelia started feeling unwell, I kind of suspected she might be pregnant.

Yeesh! It looks like we were wrong.

Okay, why is that? Was it just because that seemed logical, or because you thought I was above killing a girl, (I’ll have you…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Okay, to me it wasn’t so much that the images were real/unreal/creepy/cute/etc.etc. That’s not what matters to me. what matters is letting the reader picture what Alan is picturing when that thing is sinful. I mean…. ugh….. how to put this……… okay, one thing is that if there is any book that we are reading and the…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

*screams* he’s back!

I just meant the look on his face. lol.

Oh cool! I will be saving that one into my collection!

@keilah-h

(Okay I guess I’ll tag you to bring this to the top as a reminder.)

Good morning!

@whalekeeper

oh my goodness, you’re hilarious!

@liberty

Another thing to mention is that parents shouldn’t just be telling their children to do this or that (like reading the Bible, memorizing scripture, and loving each other). I mean, yes, they should tell and train their children to do those good things, but they also need to be telling them why they do those things. Because children hav…

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@keilah-h

I’ll send them as soon as I draw them. I’m finishing up illustrations for LTBL, so it may be a little bit.

On the fence is just where I wanted you as a reader!!

Will do! I’ll remind ya!

@keilah-h

btw, did you think I was gonna kill them?

@keilah-h

I’m so glad you liked it! Yes, one was a Stephen ending and one was a Daniel! lol.

I loved the descriptions of the different soldiers’ uniforms and stuff for some reason

Oh so do I! Honestly, I was thinking, “Keilah is going to like this,” as I was writing the descriptions! lol

This is gonna sound like a weird ask, but if you e…

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@loopylin

you’re nuts.

lolololol

@hybridlore

No, not harsh at all! This is perfect!

Not sure how many illustrations yet. I think I have 20 for the last one.

Your guess has been noted, but no answers will be given.

Thank you so much!

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!

I know. I was so mad.

Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD

I guess the B…

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THEOLOGY/MESSAGE

~ Any theological concerns for the story?

I don’t think so.

~ What would you say my world view was?

Christian? XD. (Again, I don’t really know what kind of answer you want here.)

~ What would you say was the message of the story?

God will give us strength when we are weak and help us have the courage to stand up for Him.

~Were…

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@hybridlore

Wow! This is soooo helpful!

Hmm, I find it funny that you think the ending thing feels a little un-realistic. I wrote it after reading of five different situations in different countries where something like this happened to Believers who had been arrested. XD

I guess the Bible is correct when it says God moves in mysterious…[Read more]

STORYLINE

~ Was the plot solid and engaging?

~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?

I feel like these two kind of go together. The pacing, I felt, was not very consistent. Sometimes we would be skipping over weeks or months, sometimes we would get slow, slice-of-life scenes, and sometimes we…[Read more]

I have a question

I started writing this short story, but before I continue, I’d like to know if it’s interesting.

No title yet

Also, sorry that it’s a little rough

When I was a child I loved to read books. Any moment I had to myself I would crack open a book, squeeze into a tiny but comfy corner and read. I would discover lost worlds, travel…

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@hybridlore

Oh no!!! That’s terrible!!! That makes me want to cry for you!

Yay! I’m so glad for the feedback! Thank you again so much for doing this!