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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
@ellette-giselle Here you go.
@keilah-h @highcribeofaethum
Fourth story!
Brutus
I am a hideous monster. I have taken so many lives, caused so much pain. And why? Why did I do it all? To please Father. To feel like I belonged and had purpose. That I was worth something. My true parents abandoned me, Father took me in. I had to prove to him…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
*excited clapping*
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 7 months ago
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Jaybird replied to the topic Magic Systems in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I guess I have a magic system, but it’s more a power system. In my KoS/Shattered Kingdoms series, there are unseen powers behind almost everything. Influences from the races of the Lighted and the Faded on the race of Blood. (Made the names up on the spot. XD) It’s pretty obviously allegorical, but I’m having fun developing it as if it’s not so I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Oh yeah, this is also a great article: https://booklaurie.com/blog/the-psychology-of-creating-characters/
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
thank you so much, rae!!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
thanks. I really hope so too. we have a two day drive coming up and it’ll be horrible if I’m still this bad off.
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Ruth replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I’ll be praying for you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks. ❤️
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I was carrying thing to the car and slipped on the ice. My hands were full so I caught myself on my knee against the cement and possibly knocked myself out. I was at least stunned, and my head was against the sidewalk and snow. It’s possibly cracked or I may have torn something. It just hurts so, so bad. I’ve also been randomly falling…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
I think it’s because we are a strong nation, and the only way we’ll go down is if we destroy ourselves, so those who hate America want to see us divided and destroyed from the inside.
Agreed
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
I’ll try, but I’m pretty badly injured right now so we’ll see if I’m conscious and able to make my brain work.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
I totally agree with both of you about the race thing they’re teaching in schools. I honestly think we were fine where we are today. I never say black people looked down on in America in my lifetime. But now they’re just stirring up old quarrels. And, if the white people are the badguys and need to build up black people, t…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy Adventure RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 7 months ago
Baron (Brutus)—with Ben Gunn, Flare, Ellis, and Jenna following after Felicity.Â
Brutus watched the creatures coming his way, dropping down his scarf. He didn’t know if the small band could out run the things. Could he muster enough wind to carry them away? He could try. A powerful wind came to him, and he turned…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
I love that story idea! It sounds super interesting, and I would totally pick it up. Elishavet had some great advice. Let’s see… what do I do for character arcs?
Honestly, it takes a while for these things to come together in my writing. I don’t sit down to write for the first time and already know all the details of my plot and c…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
Nice! Do you take offense when someone says/ask if your church is a denomination in a way? Just wondering!
No, I don’t think so. We don’t have many specific traditions besides Communion every couple weeks. My family has attended several different churches in the past few years because of moving around so often, so I wou…[Read more]
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @trailblazer @theducktator @stephie
Yeah, I rarely wear makeup either. Probably mostly for your reasons, Trailblazer. It’s just a lot of work and I honestly prefer the natural look on myself anyway (from what I’ve seen.)
Also… what’s with all the new names? XD
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Denomination Q and A in the forum Mission, Calling & Ethics 1 year, 7 months ago
@savannah_grace2009 @theducktator @stephie
Even if I did want to wear makeup regularly, I don’t really know how to apply most of it anyway lol.
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Trailblazer replied to the topic Character Arcs in the forum Characters 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks! That’s helpful to consider!
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