Liberty

@keilah-h

Yeah, we just fell back into a Narnia Whirl. My sister’s been rereading them, and we restarted on the Focus on the Family versions. It’s been lovely. XD

Narnia was the first thing we seriously made up fanfics for that I remember. It was bonkers, but fun. Now that we’re older, taking her story seriously isn’t so daunting. It’s very…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

yes, yes, and YES!!!!

Oh my goodness!!! We you the one I was talking to about this!?! I literally just told someone that I wanted to write a book that followed Susan after the others died!!!

@keilah-h

Yeah! That sounds like an awesome idea!

@raxforge @loopylin

Syph

This hall was getting rather full of too tall people, but this place was probably full of such halls. He sighed. Best to find his way while there was someone of the Big hight on hand to see where they were going.

“Nay, my friend. I must decline your kind offer, although I certainly do appreciate your generosity. There…[Read more]

And Carmichael. One of Peter’s school friends who is determined to watch after this last Pevensie. After all, Peter was the only one who believed him, all those years ago…

@koshka @power @ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed @mostKeePers @Narnians!!!

I honestly don’t know who are Narnia nerds în here. Most of us have fond memories for the series. Anyone love Susan? Lucy and Peter were always my favorite, but I still loved the others. Anyone read The Last Battle and cry? *cough, cough*

According to C. S. Lewis,…[Read more]

@loopylin

Alpha

Alpha tossed Dante a handkerchief. “Sorry, I was playing with a new technique. And put pressure on that cut.” Alpha reached out his hand and recalled the knife, which had lost its vapor but still came to his hand. “Sorry about the coat. I can get my little sister to fix it if you would like me to.” Alpha used the same process to…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

LOL I’m laughing so hard, I’m crying.

@keilah-h

There’s actually a reason Silvanis acts this way. Maybe Sniper will figure it out sometime. It’d be funny to see what he would say XD.

@theshadow

I would love to see it!

@theducktator

Lol. Everything looks better with an ellipse.

I’ll watch that. 

@keilah-h @theshadow @theducktator @kyronthearcanin @princesachronicles22

Silvanis and Fairy

Fairy smiled. She loved hearing everyone sing. She turned to Silvanis who was sitting beside her. “Isn’t it wonderful? I love hearing all the different songs!”

“Wonderful, no. Interesting, yes,” He replied.

Fairy elbowed him. “It is wonderful! Everyone…[Read more]

@loopylin

Would you like Dante and Alpha to interact? I can have him go back to their room. If not, that’s ok too :]

Sure. Sorry I haven’t been very active.

I’ll write something short with Alpha quick

Alpha

The scraping sound of blade to stone filled the room. Alpha carefully sharpened one of his knives, before stopping and checking the edge. D…[Read more]

@linus-smallprint

Awesome! I approved it.

@linus-smallprint

hah!! That’s great! This is going to be so funny if I do!

@keilah-h @ellette-giselle

Y’all were talking about British and Australian exclamations and it reminded me of something that happened recently…

So we have friends who are Australian, but their dad is the only one who actually naturally has the accent. I’m a sucker for the Aussie accent, lol. And I was talking with him one time and with some…[Read more]

Also, one thing I just thought of; we don’t really care about the characters’ families since we haven’t met them yet. Maybe it would be a good idea to lengthen the first chapter by showing Jack and Elina getting home and seeing their parents and siblings.

@theshadow

This chapter does a good job building up the suspense! The only thing I would say is yeah, Ellette has a point. These girls seem to be so mean for no real reason that I can guess at yet. It makes them feel flatter, rather than like actual people who have motives and stuff for their actions. Their ultimate goal, especially in a…[Read more]

@theshadow

i am so relieved Jack is still there!! Also, I have a feeling I’m going to like Dylan.
just a hunch.

also, I’m not sure about Olivia and Adaline’s reaction. You see, when people bully others it tends to be because of insecurity and cowardice. I have yet to meet a truly confidant and courageous bully. That being said, they seem too c…[Read more]