Liberty

@elishavet-pidyon

yes. That is appropriate sound effects there. 😂

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

woah!! What makes you say that? 😅

lololol. I wrote this before reading those. Yes, perfect archer name.

as for Leon… we shall have to see.

@whalekeeper

Ok sounds good!

I would, but I’m focusing on writing and not editing for these next few months.

@loopylin

Also I just had an idea. What if, as Chase got closer to certain people, he started associating them in his mind with different animals depending on their personality? Could be a way he gets more comfortable around some people. Just an idea though. You can use if you want or not.

That is an awesome idea! And it sounds just like something…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

I’m game 🙂

@highscribeofaetherium

Aw, I love it! The colors are so cheerful and the lines are so clean… ♥️

Taking pictures of art is rough. It still looks great though!

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m hoping to actually finish a draft this summer. Just not sure which project…*glances nervously toward glowering characters*

*Whispers* I think they’re hanging up on me.

@whalekeeper

That sounds like fun! I’m not exactly sure how busy I’ll be this summer, but I’d love to join in. The next few weeks are going to be kind of crazy though.

Also, I signed up for Crazy Editing Week. It’s right after my school term ends, so I’m hoping to get some stuff done. XD

Is anyone else planning on doing it?

@whalekeeper

Yes!

I’m working over the summer, but it’s maintenance on a campground, so I expect to have an easier schedule than I now.

@theducktator

That’s vicious. And brilliant.

… I have. O_O It was okay. XD Not worth risking Natalian citizenship.

@ellette-giselle

Oh no!!! Not Leon!!

Good section. One thing I noticed was that you mentioned that the people were able to find a lot of food during the winter… then you said that it had been hard on everyone, especially the wolves. I get that they eat meat and not plants, but it was kind of confusing.

otherwise, good job! 😬

@ellette-giselle

Dun dun duuuunnnn.

Nice! I really liked those last few chapters!

Notes…

Poor Julian. He’s a lonely little guy.

Night was falling fast and there was no shelter. They were hemmed in by high cliffs on either side, and the wind shrieked down the path.

This section made me think of Carahadras. Brrrrrrr.

…

Hmm. They seemed to…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

It’s digital art, which is definitely beyond me at best, so you get a gold star for that. ⭐!!

And now I can imagine him a bit better! You did a really good job capturing his character. I like it. 🙂

@liberty

Eh, he’s just 17. You can call him boy for another few years without it being weird. XD

Deductions…

He’s gentle and tender hearted. He has a strong faith in God and tries to share it with his friends, if he has any.

He loves nature and animal, especially birds. He likes to draw the world around him, and maybe has a special notebook…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Ok, that’s just beautiful! The pictures and messages are most of them sad/dark, but it’s so aesthetic that I keep coming back to look at it. You did such a good job bringing the different pictures together.

Love them both! The character claims do fit them very well.

Their stories are just… Sniff. I really want more Leon…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed  @hybridlore    @koshka   @keilah-h    @elishavet-pidyon   @liberty  @linus-smallprint

NEXT SECTION!

The seventeenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
March 13th 
The Empire

We are all settled down inside a cave complex the Lord led us to. It has begun to really snow in earnest outside, but we have wood for a fir…

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@freed_and_redeemed

*shuts mouth and stews silently.*

🤣

No, it’s really good. You did a great job. 🥰

@loopylin

Sorry that I haven’t been active. I wasn’t sure what to rp, and there was alot of life stuff I was working with.

Chase

Chase shook his head. “Wha-what t-teach-er g-gives t-tree l-less-ons?” Besides, if you want to climb trees, you can talk to squirrels about it. They can tell you all kind of things about the different kind of trees…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Though I do know soldiers had to be clean shaven at that time…….. 🤭

Shhhh let me have my creative liberty😂🫶