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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@keilah-h Good plan 😉
he certainly needs it
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Yesss yess yessssss I’m so excited for him ✨✨ (and worried, but that’s a conversation for another day 😭👀)
And yes, the poor guy. He’s been through a lot…gotta give him a lot of grace🥰
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freedom replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@esther-c Tysm for your advice!! 💖 @rae @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @smiley @keilah-h @savannah_grace2009 @lightoverdarkness6 @whalekeeper @anyone-else
Another Riker scene!! And, finally, a Leon scene😂💖 Because apparently Leon/Riker are still running free in my mind even tho I thought I would take a break from them. XD
(and I apologize for…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
@freed_and_redeemed
Ooh, I understand. M’kay, so I cannot write a book without a dual POV, lol, I think it’s impossible for me at this point. XD
When I first started writing from a dual POV, I gave each POV a chapter, but as I starting writing better stories, I noticed that I was adding unnecessary stuff to the chapters, just to make them lon…[Read more] -
Ruth posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
I’m thinking of submitting a short story to KP this summer. No promises, but it might just work out. 🙂
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Ruth replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
I stand corrected.
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Koshka posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
Dear fellow KeyPers,
This next bit of life is going to be pure chaos and exhaustion, so I’m afraid I won’t be around the Pen Kingdom very often for a couple weeks. Maybe not till July.
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Ruth replied to the topic Any tips for writing serious characters? in the forum Characters 2 years, 3 months ago
To help make them interesting, I like to show the weak side sometimes. You know, they’re a tough warrior but inside they long deeply for something, they just won’t admit it. With tough charries, you need to show they are human, like with any other charrie. Even if they keep emotions locked away inside, show they still have them.
Also, if this is…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
If Sef does not come back I will be gone for a week in protest!!!!!!!!
I love this charrie!
Plus, Chase just ran from detention, bit a teacher, ran away and met Sebster Gangster and Dante, then got in trouble again, then tried to run away again but ran into a wall. He’s now in serious trouble with math teacher lady, a side…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Leo
He sighed and shuffled back a little more. If this Liko fellow wanted to fix the pipe proper, if he had some clue what he was doing, Leo would be the last person to stand in his way.
Or rather, flop in the way.
“Call me Leo.” He folded his arms under his chin to watch and point his headlamp. Liko seemed to know what he was doing,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Okay, Alpha kinda likes her already…
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Alpha
“So…safety first, understand?”
Alpha smiled. “Of course safety comes first, that’s why I have this bandage around my ribs and you aren’t dead right now.” Whether he was sarcastic or serious, it couldn’t be told. Alpha placed his left fist over his heart, and bowed his head to the girl. “I sincerely apologize to you,…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I should probably get Chase going to do something…
Chase
Chase stirred, pushing away the comforting warmth of the blanket that he had curled up in. Opening his eyes, they immediately turned from green to charcol toothpaste grey. He didn’t remember where he was or why he had a bandage on his head until he saw Hannah quietly reading in her chair…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Alpha thinks that ‘press charges’ means literally pressing something similar to battery charges.
#Wondiansnotunderstandingearthlingsagain
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Alpha
“Press charges? What do you mean by that? Stars, this language and culture is confusing!” If this were a Realn, she’d just accept my apology, we’d salute and then move on. It’d be forgotten in an instant, but no, this girl has to use confusing terms!
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
#Wondiansdon’tunderstandEarthlings
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Aw, I like little robot companions! They’re always so cute.
Alpha
Alpha stared at her, out of a mixture of wonder (for he had never seen in his life hair as long as this girl’s) and confusion (for he didn’t know what premeditating meant.) He mumbled something in Realn to himself, trying to figure out if ‘premeditating’ meant the…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
Leo
The light in his eyes was vaguely familiar in all the wrong ways. Leo squinted, wrinkling his nose into a grimace. “That’s what the paperwork said.”
The light shifted to his handiwork, leaving Leo to blink away the two suns imprinted on his retina.
“The leak’s stopped.” He said, adding a for now under his breath. A small bulge…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Fantasy/Modern School AU RP in the forum General Writing Discussions 2 years, 3 months ago
I just found another song that is soooooo Alpha.
Whatever it takes by Imagine Dragons
That and Believer perfectly fit Alpha.
Apparently it didn’t post, but I like your charrie! She sounds great!
If you don’t like this introduction, let me know. It’s what I could think of to make Alpha notice her.
Alpha
“Speaking of combat,”…[Read more]
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Ruth posted an update 2 years, 3 months ago
Alpha-Believer and Whatever it takes.
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Ooh, good luck!!
Thanks.
That would be awesome, I hope it works out! Good luck (: