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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Narrow Path Trilogy Book I: The Cost in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
It’s Eric, I’m guessing.
Hmmm, can you get him captured without Alan knowing about it? That seems like the easiest way out.
Other then that, you could get him rescued easily if….. idk….. Stripe comes and knocks the guy out while Alan distracts him. Or something of that sort. Eric would still feel really stupid and useless…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Well hey there little buddy. Tagging me several times in one post is not nice either, because then you spam the mess out of my email and it crashes.
So, don’t do that.
On a more serious note, I’m not sure if you’re joking or not about your family and about some of us not being Christians. Online chats are hard because you…[Read more]
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Koshka replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
*Glares*
You killed him. I’m more than mildly miffed at you.
*Huffs*
*Contemplates writing you into a short story just so I can heap vengeance with my pen*
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As to the last section…
This could just be a difference is my own temperament, upbringing, or understanding, but I’m not sure I agree with how Sabina handled the…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Ah, Sabina’s idea. That has history.
Let’s just say, a long time ago, the last fight I had with my brother ended when mom duct taped our wrists together.
For the whole day.
We had to do school together, eat together, play together, do chores together. It was traumatic. lololololol. At least I had my right hand free, but i had to…[Read more]
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
you cannot have him he’s minewell technically Huntress’s but we all know she’s mostly me so…..MINELol. This made me laugh so hard.
You have your Aussie, I have my Aussie, and I wouldn’t switch for the world. (No offense, Sniper, but I love him more than you.)
yeah when creating the different species I was like “well I want my c…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
Ohh, I’m sorry. I didn’t know that was a rule. 😅
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I would have, and that’s what I have in mind, but I was limited to one word. 🤷♀️
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Ruth replied to the topic Talking about are Fanfics in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
ooh I forgot to ask you. How do you like the sci-fi setting? Do you have a favorite out of all the characters? A favorite species? And is it influenced by your favorite character’s species or is it separate?
sorry I just love seeing how people like my worldbuilding, and given that you have a sci-fi WIP too…..
I like the sci…[Read more]
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Jaybird replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 year, 10 months ago
Oh! I love hearing about your progress. This is so exciting!
The aesthetics are exquisite! I love all the little peoples in them. They really show Riker’s tender heart.
Hans will forever be “a cold sore on the lip of life” like Anne Shirley puts it, but hey, what makes a better villain? I agree that he’s not flat, (dare I…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Oof, yeah, I get that. It is one of the hardest parts about stories, but also one of the things that really makes you love the characters!
I thought it was pretty realistic that the boys would be quick to fight with each other because they are worn out and worried. Sabina’s idea to help them make up was pretty smart. And she g…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yeah, I guess it really isn’t that long. It just took me two hours to edit because of the relationship dynamics. Those are such a pain sometimes.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Yes Wyoh dear! We love you now! Please come eat the crazy potato!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Yeah, no kidding. You are making no sense at all.
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Yep! lol. I read pretty fast sometimes, but it wasn’t that long of a section. Plus I saw pretty much as soon as you posted it. 😅
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Ruth replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
someone kick him off KP.
Lol
Wyoh, come be a heroine!
@the_lost-potatoe
Did you tag me just because I asked how many potato pfp you had? Lol.
I also have no idea what this all about. You make as much sense to me right now as Nae does to Alpha when she talks in her sleep!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
Aww, I love it!!! 🥰
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Veil of Night– second book in The Flames of Hope Saga in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 10 months ago
@hybridlore @linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h
It wasn’t long before Asher, Eric, and Alicia were also awake. The five sat silently in the bedroom, listening breathlessly for any sound from downstairs. At last, Alicia spoke. “Do you think I should go down there and check?”
Sabina shook her head. “Noah said to stay.”
“But i…
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hybridlore replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 10 months ago
I mean, the topic is very broad. It could be as simple as showing the leaves of a tree withering and dying, or the spiritual death and resurrection of a new believer. It doesn’t necessarily mean you have to show someone dying–and even if you do, there’s a way to handle it in a way that doesn’t glorify…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The magic Potato knows best in the forum Art 1 year, 10 months ago
Is this because the profile update links weren’t working?
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