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hybridlore replied to the topic The Color of Hope in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
It just sounds so much better than “looked”. XD
@shadow @ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @linus-smallprint @keilah-h @theducktator @savannah-grace2009 @sorry-if-i-forgot-anyone-😢
Next two chapters! 😆 I’m fairly pleased with these. Chapter 13 (Alec’s first POV!) may need to be extended a bit, but it certainly ups the stakes a bit. At…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 6 months ago
Happy late birthday!!!!!!!! 🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I’m shaking my head at you right now.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
Sounds good.
*eyes you suspiciously*
*grins evilly*
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Yeah, sometimes it looks different and the entire website doesn’t load, but it still works usually.
You 100% are!!
Nice. 😎
I feel like I’ve had a tone of those scenes though.
Yeah, good point. Maybe add something in their journal entries about how it went well, and how Leon is proud of Julian? Something like that.
You have no ide…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Oh good. It’s been glitching all morning on my end.
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
You 100% are!!
When did Leon start calling the governor Walter? I was a bit confused, but I probably just missed the part where you introduced him.
When the governor told him to. XD
It happened when they were looking over t…[Read more]
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I got tagged for both of these, so I’m assuming it’s working again for the most part.
since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore,
I’m just your #1 fan 😉 Well, online fan anyway.
Good section. I was right about them meeting the boy again, but wrong about him coming with them. Oh well.
When did Leon start calli…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey, I’m looking to get a job as a developmental editor/proofreader. Would I be allowed to reference The Narrow Path Trilogy as one of the things I worked on? I can give the full title and your name, or I could do something like TNPT by ____ (whatever name you want me to use, etc.
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Ellette Giselle posted an update 1 year, 6 months ago
Hey, I’m looking to get a job as a developmental editor/proofreader. Would I be allowed to reference The Baron Chronicles as one of the things I worked on? I can give the full title and your name, or I could do something like TBC by ____ (whatever name you want me to use, etc.
If not, that’s totally fine. I’m just looking for things I’ve…[Read more]-
No pressure at all if you would rather not.
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That’s totally fine with me! I also double-checked with my Mom, and she said it was okay.
The name I will be publishing is Ruth A. Eisele. Let me know if you need help with anything else, I’d be glad to help 🙂-
Okay, this will be advertised online on a web page. (Just a heads up if I didn’t make that clear)
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Thank you so much, btw!!
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The full title is fine.
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Awesome! Thank you!
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @elishavet-pidyon @Keilah-h
Just a heads up to y’all, if KP is acting up and you don’t get tagged, I normally post a section every morning, (save Sunday) baring assassination, the women’s draft (in which case I will go under ground and change my author’s name), or an opportunity…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@linus-smallprint @Liberty @Hybridlore @Koshka @Elishavet-Eloy @Keilah-h
Lets try this again
NEXT SECTION!!!
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
April 30th
The EmpireLeon was not arrested as we had feared, thank God. The Governor only wanted to speak with him, and the results have been unbelievable. The…
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
The sixteenth year of Emperor Haidronias’s reign
April 30th
The Empire
Leon was not arrested as we had feared, thank God. The Governor only wanted to speak with him, and the results have been unbelievable. The slave market was abolished and the slaves freed. The games dedicated to train and select fighter for the tournament of the gods will n…[Read more] -
Ellette Giselle replied to the topic Art Sharing For All 🙂 in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
THAT IS SO GOOD!!!!
Girl that is really amazing! I think you’ve found your drawing rhythm! These are insanely good.
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
@linus-smallprint @koshka @keilah-h @elishavet-pidyon @liberty
I plan on posting another section today as usual, but since no one has been replying to this except for Hybridlore, I’m wondering if Y’all need me to wait a day or two? What do y’all think? I don’t want to completely lose ya.
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Ruth replied to the topic The Baron Chronicles in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 year, 6 months ago
30k words in The Baron Chronicles!!!!!!!
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
Probably not, I guess I just missed that.
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Jaybird replied to the topic Art/Illustration Critique in the forum Art 1 year, 6 months ago
This is a great idea! I often am in need of a little troubleshooting, but am not sure how to proceed.
*sees clean gesture drawing*
*is in bliss*
I have no experience in digital art, so I’m no help there. Love the proportion guide though. I need to do more of those…
I guess for design stuff, try to view…[Read more]
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Ellette Giselle replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
I said he was the same age as Ernst, Rolf’s brother, and I said Ernst was about 15-16
Do I need more then that?
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hybridlore replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 6 months ago
ack, yes, I missed a word there. When I read it over my brain said it was there. XD
XD Yep, happens to me too.
Okay, so Julian was about 17-19 in Joseph’s book (I never specified) which makes him in his late twenties now. Leon is a few years older so late twenties to very early thirties.
Rolf and Roland are around 19-25
Aelic is 1… - Load More
also, this will be on a website, just so you know.