Liberty

@hybridlore

Yes! He does enjoy music.

@elishavet-pidyon

Ah! That makes perfect sence now!

The scrolls are his writings and maps…but I’ll keep in mind what you said about them being something like ancient writings…

As for the horn…I’m not saying anything about that just yet…🤭 🫢

@keilah-h

You are dead on with all of those!

@elishavet-pidyon

You are right on most of those. He is curious, loves to whittle, is a wanderer, and can fight well.

What did you mean by a “messanger/somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle”?

Oh yes, he is a strategist. (Hence, he loves chess)

Yes! He is more of a found family…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

I finished another character yesterday! He was a lot of fun…

Any thoughts/guesses on what this fellow is like?

@elishavet-pidyon

I’m glad it helped!

Only Beric and Kyler are blacksmiths.

@hybridlore

I know! I saw that!

@keilah-h

Yes…he does.

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

Here’s the enxt board! What do you think of this fellow?

@elishavet-pidyon

No problem!

As far as I can remember, the story went like this:

It was after the train crash. Susan had heard the news and was devastated. The loss of her entire family brought a new light into her narrowed vision. I think she was sitting in front of a mirror in her room. You read mentions of the path of her…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you! This story needs to lot of work still…and I won’t be getting to writing it just yet since there are other things I have to do first, but I’m currently outlining it and working on character development!

@raxforge

😂 Thanks! I didn’t hear the sarcasm.

@ellette-giselle

Or more like his dry sarcasm.

@ellette-giselle

You can email me.

Yes…it does look like that…when I had Merry look over it, I realized I hadn’t included the humorous side of Kyler. But, I think that’s okay. You get to see his dry humor in the story.

@raxforge

Ooo! It sounds intriguing! Squirrel stories are always so much fun! So, I’m assuming something terrible happened between the squirrels and ducks?

@rae

Yes! I do write animal stories.

@ellette-giselle

😊

Your boards helped me a lot!

What do you think about him? What do you think he is like?

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle

Here is my next board! What do you think? Any thoughts about Kyler?

@ellette-giselle

No…. I’m not gonna explain the painting scene. You and everyone else are in the dark and will just have to do your best to figure it out.🙃

WHAT?!

*sob*

How could you do that to us?!

@ellette-giselle

~ Was the plot solid and engaging?

Pretty much!

~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?

It seemed that a lot of incidents were happening during the time that Leon and Rolf had their entire slavery journey compared to the rest of the story. There may have been a few lagging…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, great!

@ellette-giselle

My gosh, you have a lot of questions! 😂 Now I don’t feel bad for having a lot of questions for my stories!