Liberty

@koshka

Great! I’m looking forward to it!

@esther-c

Awesome!

@keilah-h

Sure thing.

@calyhuge Yes…I think that applies to me even…I’ve done that before, and it doesn’t go well.

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Please pardon me, everyone…I can’t believe I forgot about the deadline!!!!! So sorry about that…

Well, it looks like all things work together for good since Esthe…[Read more]

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@esther-c @keilah-h

Would some more time help?

Oh, I forgot to tag you:

@esther-c

A neat and sweet story! When I first read it, it seemed your writing was in a different time zone/tense than the italicized beginning. To me, it seemed like the narrative suddenly switched to more present tense…like the character was actually experiencing everything instead of writing it after it had already happened.

Maybe adding some past…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Nice! Did you study/read about instances where Christians first talked to unbelievers like your scene above?

@ellette-giselle

Great! That’s a great trope to break.

Ernst is the name of Josef’s son in CR, right?

@ellette-giselle

I just read your latest section. I was struck by how German their names are!😂 And…you created another Ernst?

Haha! I’ve had others complain that the wolves DIDN’T attack! XD.

Then, I’m extremely glad I told you my input. The animals do not have to attack every single time! *shaking head* So unrealistic.

@ellette-giselle

My thoughts on Section 2:

“We don’t believe in the gods of the Empire,” Julian cut in.

There was a stunned silence.

“We worship the One true God,” Julian explained.

I think Leon should be the one to try explaining things. It would seem to fit his character…and give him something to say since he doesn’t say anything until “Ju…[Read more]

@esther-c

🥰

@esther-c

500 words or more.

@ellette-giselle

I know.

But the MOST utterly hilarious part is the goat woo!!!!!! When we first heard it, we were utterly shocked. And then we had to repeated that part again…and again…and again…and it is still belly-achingly funny!!!!!!🤣

@ellette-giselle

I’m choking with laughter.

@ellette-giselle

Sometimes love is dunderheaded!”

*gagging at the reference*…

@the_lost-journal

I take German! I invented the quote myself! 😂

Neat! I wanted to learn German for a while…and still do.

@linus-smallprint

I looked it up. The wolf is adorable! But, does he have a name?

@ellette-giselle

Yes! For some reason, I imagined the people of the Empire to be taller…in movies, the Romans are usually taller…

@ellette-giselle

I read the first post from today.