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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
😂 I think he’ll think it’s funny. And he might even be pleased that something picked a name like his for a book character…even if they’re a bad guy…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I already attempted to do so and got out-debated. She took fake-Alec. 😖
Wait, what does that mean? Who’s fake-Alec?
You don’t care about Leon?
I do! I do! Just…maybe I like Rolf better??🫣
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Wow. Yup. Has some similarities to Papa.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I got one across the arm on accident and that thing scared for almost a year!
Woah…um…do I want to ask this?…yes…I will…
So, uh, who whipped you?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Even if we fail…we should at least try…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
The KP WITNESS PROTECTION has been initiated to protect characters from their authors. Beware.
By the way, I love this line!!!! I feel like it’s so true…we must protect Rolf!!!!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
*gasp of horror*
Well at least it’s spelled differently and your father is not Arab. (right?)
Right! He’s not Arab…but half Turkish.
Goodness! The amount of names of family members I’ve used? *faints*
My goodness. Poor you!
Hey! You are looking at the wrong person! I didn’t hit Rolf with a horsewhip!
I know, I know…
I mean,…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
I was milking her…and she hit me in the face with her tail. Well, it’s happened many of times, so I received different kinds of lashes. The ones I’m thinking of when I read about Rolf was the horrid dry-tail flicks. It usually hurts the most when only a few strands of their tail hit your face.
But man, they hurt bad. Catching y…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Nearby, he saw Rolf lying on his side, his shoulders jerking with silent, tearless sobs. Leon couldn’t blame him.
😭😭😭
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Okay. I’ll mention the ink just for you.
Aw. Thanks!🥰
you might not see one of them ever again.
WHAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NONONONONONO!! Okay, if you have to kill one of them…pick Roland…please…I already like Rolf way too much since he got whipped in the face…and I now know a character who understands what that feels like…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Hassan struck him across the face with his horse whip. Rolf bent, gasping from the pain, his hand pressed to his face.
OH MY GOSH!!!!! OW. OW. OW!!!
I know that’s like!! Except a cow delivered the lash to my face…
I can totally feel what Rolf’s feeling right then!!! *sob* SO cruel, Ellette!!!! Do you have any idea how much p…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
“There is only one god you need to worry about, and that is me: Hassan Salim.
You’ve got to be joking. Hassan is my father’s name…only it’s written with one “s”: Hasan.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 month, 4 weeks ago
Nooo….. they are brought in by the traders. People of the Empire are NEVER sold as slaves
Maybe saying something about that, then? I wasn’t sure if the people were a different people group. I would think they look different than Aryan..because that’s what the People of the Empire are.
Does it need to?
I think it may be good to m…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Julian rifled about in his pack for their cooking pot and handed it to Aelic. “Go and get some then, but for goodness’ sake don’t you fall and sprain your ankle.”
Aelic’s probably used to running around the forests…I could just see him bare-footed, dashing among the trees with his hair flying about!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Roland smiled and nodded.
Rolf leaned forward in excitement. “What did you say?”
Roland flushed again. “Well, a few things. The important thing is, I asked her to wait for me.”
Rolf’s eyes widened slightly. “And?”
“And she said she would.”
I feel like at least one of the other characters should be saying something here. I…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
YES!!! Help please! I’m dying under all this writing! *gasp* *head rolls off…*
I’m so behind again. Maybe you could wait a day or two for me to catch up?
Oh yes. I understand what you said to me about Leon’s past.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 months ago
Any thoughts on that?
Hmm…well, I was a tad bit surprised by how sharp Leon was with Julian. I don’t know their past friendship well…but I wasn’t expecting Leon to react to Julian like that…like just closing the conversation. I thought he seemed to be a very open character, especially as a Christian…but maybe some things…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 2 months ago
🥰
Thanks! It’s my first…and I’m pretty pleased with how it turned out. After thinking about it, though, I think I will add some pictures and edit some of the words. Guy has two sides of himself. and the board doesn’t really show the second side of him…so I’m thinking of updating it.
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