Liberty

@ellette-giselle

Roland smiled and nodded.

Rolf leaned forward in excitement. “What did you say?”

Roland flushed again. “Well, a few things. The important thing is, I asked her to wait for me.”

Rolf’s eyes widened slightly. “And?”

“And she said she would.”

I feel like at least one of the other characters should be saying something here. I…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

YES!!! Help please! I’m dying under all this writing! *gasp* *head rolls off…*

I’m so behind again. Maybe you could wait a day or two for me to catch up?

Oh yes. I understand what you said to me about Leon’s past.

@ellette-giselle

Any thoughts on that?

Hmm…well, I was a tad bit surprised by how sharp Leon was with Julian. I don’t know their past friendship well…but I wasn’t expecting Leon to react to Julian like that…like just closing the conversation. I thought he seemed to be a very open character, especially as a Christian…but maybe some things…[Read more]

@hybridlore

🥰

@theducktator

Thanks! It’s my first…and I’m pretty pleased with how it turned out. After thinking about it, though, I think I will add some pictures and edit some of the words. Guy has two sides of himself. and the board doesn’t really show the second side of him…so I’m thinking of updating it.

@elishavet-pidyon

Sorry…I looked for the Susan story but couldn’t find it. I found some others, but none of them compared to the one I read. It was short, but very beautiful, sweet, and Christian.

If you like, I can retell what I remember of the story.

@ellette-giselle

Ooh…we’re getting to see a little bit of Leon’s past!

So wait, are the only people at that place students? I don’t see much mention of villagers during that winter season. If there were villagers, did they move into the University as well?

Is their inn connected to the University? Because in that deep of snow… amid a b…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Me too!

@keilah-h

@hybridlore @elishavet-pidyon @ellette-giselle (In case you were wondering about Guy as well)

Here’s somewhat of a summary:

A man searching for redemption from his past…
 
A band of outlaws trying to make a difference…
 
A land twisted and poisoned by its cold-hearted rulers…
 

Guy is a young man living with a deep inner…

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@ellette-giselle

Well, your moodboards did show that.

@ellette-giselle

Well, I’m guessing someone is going to get thrown into a colosseum. You have five guys there…some of them are bound to get hurt…or killed. It just has to happen.

@ellette-giselle

Ahhh!!! I remember now! Thanks for showing that verse to me. I’m all caught up. Finally. I’m hoping not to get behind in the future because then you have to read a lot more!!!

@hybridlore

Nope. That was the one instrument I longed to play…but am pretty sure I won’t. It looks SO hard! Plus, I already play the piano and ukulele and am planning to pick up the guitar this year.

So, yes, playing the violin is one of my never-to-be-fulfilled-unless-God-intervenes dreams.

@ellette-giselle

“Why? Who’s going to read it?”

Wasn’t Julien journaling as well? Maybe he should say something else?

Leon was watching Julian with astonishment. Never had he heard him give such strong and quick responses in an argument like this.

This is by far the most interesting part I’ve read!!!! I love it!

Julian lunged and grabbed the stu…

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@ellette-giselle

That section from Aelic reminds me so much of the “Winter King”! So far, I think his salvation story was the best! Well, there weren’t that many details concerning Roland and the others… anyway, that’s what I think.

@ellette-giselle

So, I’m assuming Roland lives with Rolf’s family?

@hybridlore

Thank you!

I see you have another girl with a violin. Do you play it?

@elishavet-pidyon

Yes, he is the protagonist.

Thank you for your tips!

I use Bryce as Guy’s younger brother.

Guy and Bryce originally came from a different story that I had, and that’s where I fell in love with Bryce, but that story sort of to the shelf of books that would never be written. I was sad about that since I loved the brother…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

You have a BRYCE????!!! Oh my gosh! I absolutely adore that name because of one of my characters! I read Susan’s fan fiction story after the train accident. It was really good.

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle

Big news! I just completed my first-ever mood board!!!! I’m so excited to hear what you all think! Do you all have any tips for making them?

Guy is my MC from my wip, Refuge Rangers. I’m planning to make boards for his men…and write a short story to go along with each…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Awesome! Which tent did you join?

@hybridlore

Thanks! I really need to help Dale recover…he’s turning into a pessimist…but don’t worry! He’ll recover and find joy again. 🤭