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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 months, 3 weeks ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 8 months, 3 weeks ago
No worries! Thanks for getting back to me, though.
Great! From the three POVs, how would you describe those three fellows? Zahn, Kyler, and Guy.
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
Okay, great! I’m glad you felt that difference.
Yes…Jace is the youngest. Everyone else is in their twenties or thirties…Jace is the only one with the word “teen” in his age. Everyone views him like their little brother.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol…
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.
I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
The story:
Starlit Night
A Refuge Rangers Short Story
“When was the last time you ate squirrel, Jace?”
Zahn looked up from his third stanza to spot Kyler poking a blackened rodent over the fire. Jace sat on the opposite side of the fire, scribbling away in his leather book. His blond head barely lifted at Kyler’s question.
“You mean th…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 9 months ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore
Hello girls! I recently completed my first short story from Refuge Rangers! I thought I’d tag you since you’ve all been reviewing the guys moodboards. Here’s an glimpse of their characters in a story! Burd isn’t there…and I’ve yet to post about Zahn and Keiden. But I will soon! Lord…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Oh no! Oops. Well, you can go with Beatrice. She is really bossy.
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I picked Beatrice because she wasn’t not wise in picking nail polish for her team…it was just for herself! That was pretty selfish. I wanted to pick Pawel for immunity…but he wasn’t one of the options. I chose Jayden next because he seemed kind and worked together with his team.
Oh! I didn’t get that part…okay, here are…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 9 months, 2 weeks ago
Ahh!!! I loved the part when Buddy gave the frisbee back! I was cheering my boy all the way. And when the Sirens decided not to cheat. Pawel sounds like a great character. Kyomi is terrible! I wish I could vote her out.
Elimination: E
Immunity: 4
Challenge: Z!!! (This game is so much fun in real life)
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 9 months, 2 weeks ago
I may not be that active, but I can vote still.
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 9 months, 2 weeks ago
“YUCK! Why are our cookies so salty!?” Sebastian yelled and spat the batter into the trash.
“It can’t be that bad?” Buddy tried a little of the batter and spat it into the garbage. “Your right, it’s worse than bad, it’s horrible!” Buddy gaged.
“Come on guys, I think you’re exaggerating…” Owiti stuck in his finger, tasted the ba…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Are you or anyone else from KP on CEW already? I’m on there @Liberty…but I don’t remember anyone else’s tags from CWW!
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
I FOUND IT!!!!! The instremental!!
Did you ever sing the EPIC along to the instremental?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Okay! I understand! Things can get very busy here, too.
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Ooo, there is instrumental for some of them.
SERIOUSLY??!!!!!! Send them PLEASE!
Yes, Athena’s theme is so beautiful! Wait until god Games!!!! 😱
Oh my gosh! I’ve yet to hear that one…but it’s one of my sister’s favorites…I’m am listening to that today, Lord willing!
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 10 months ago
Well, I absolutley love Telemachus…and I’m starting to like Odyssyus.
My younger sister and I both love Athena’s piano theme! It’s SO beautiful. Have you ever found out if there’s an intrusmental version? Because the music is stunning!
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 10 months ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 10 months ago
@ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
You girls both like EPIC?
@Ellette
Woah, I had no idea you loved it that much! I recently learned about it…I love the ending songs! The one with him and Telemachus…*crying* It was SO TOUCHING!!!! I just have a really soft spot in my heart for father and son relationships/dynamics because they are so…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 10 months ago
😂 Right. Writers are odd in certain things.
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