Liberty

@keilah-h

You are dead on with all of those!

@elishavet-pidyon

You are right on most of those. He is curious, loves to whittle, is a wanderer, and can fight well.

What did you mean by a “messanger/somehow connected to the clerical/Levitical circle”?

Oh yes, he is a strategist. (Hence, he loves chess)

Yes! He is more of a found family…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

I finished another character yesterday! He was a lot of fun…

Any thoughts/guesses on what this fellow is like?

@elishavet-pidyon

I’m glad it helped!

Only Beric and Kyler are blacksmiths.

@hybridlore

I know! I saw that!

@keilah-h

Yes…he does.

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore

Here’s the enxt board! What do you think of this fellow?

@elishavet-pidyon

No problem!

As far as I can remember, the story went like this:

It was after the train crash. Susan had heard the news and was devastated. The loss of her entire family brought a new light into her narrowed vision. I think she was sitting in front of a mirror in her room. You read mentions of the path of her…[Read more]

@freed_and_redeemed

Thank you! This story needs to lot of work still…and I won’t be getting to writing it just yet since there are other things I have to do first, but I’m currently outlining it and working on character development!

@raxforge

😂 Thanks! I didn’t hear the sarcasm.

@ellette-giselle

Or more like his dry sarcasm.

@ellette-giselle

You can email me.

Yes…it does look like that…when I had Merry look over it, I realized I hadn’t included the humorous side of Kyler. But, I think that’s okay. You get to see his dry humor in the story.

@raxforge

Ooo! It sounds intriguing! Squirrel stories are always so much fun! So, I’m assuming something terrible happened between the squirrels and ducks?

@rae

Yes! I do write animal stories.

@ellette-giselle

😊

Your boards helped me a lot!

What do you think about him? What do you think he is like?

@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore @ellette-giselle

Here is my next board! What do you think? Any thoughts about Kyler?

@ellette-giselle

No…. I’m not gonna explain the painting scene. You and everyone else are in the dark and will just have to do your best to figure it out.🙃

WHAT?!

*sob*

How could you do that to us?!

@ellette-giselle

~ Was the plot solid and engaging?

Pretty much!

~ Did the pacing feel consistent throughout the book? If not, where did it lag or feel dull?

It seemed that a lot of incidents were happening during the time that Leon and Rolf had their entire slavery journey compared to the rest of the story. There may have been a few lagging…[Read more]

@ellette-giselle

Okay, great!

@ellette-giselle

My gosh, you have a lot of questions! 😂 Now I don’t feel bad for having a lot of questions for my stories!

@hybridlore

For some reason, Ian and Albee seemed really well developed, even though we didn’t get to see them for very long.

Yes! That’s exactly what I think as well!

@ellette-giselle

~Which character(s) did you find the most compelling/relatable/believable and why?

For me, I would say I related the most to Conrad. That’s probably because I’ve had doubts before, like him, and faced fears and uncertainties.

I would also relate to Julian in certain areas since I am kind of like him.

I thought that Dian was a…[Read more]