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Liberty replied to the topic WIP Suggestion in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 1 year, 2 months ago
Ah…so her immortality is a curse…that makes it very interesting…
Have you ever heard of “Tuck Everlasting”? You might want to the storyline out for ideas since some of the characters in there are immortal…and problems occur because of that…I’ve never watched the film…I think there’s a book? But I know the storyline.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Woohooooo!!!!!!! *victory dance*
So…you’re introducing a new people culture?
Oh, the romans/germans are called the Empire? Empirians? *cackling*
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
It has to be that. Everything else looks Roman!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Okay…are you talking about those guys with turbans? They’re not Ardentin…right? Or Roman? (I forgot what those Romans were called…)
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
*gasp* I have to find that hidden odd thing!
Oh…for some reason I thought they were brothers…oh…that makes sense.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@theduckator
Sorry…again…
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
@power @jonas @whalekeeper @theduckator @elishavet-pidyon @freed_and_redeemed
Sorry, the tags didn’t tag you.
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Liberty replied to the topic Short Short Story Prompt War! in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 year, 2 months ago
Participants/potential participants:
@hybridlore @ellette-giselle @raxforge @esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @theshadow @keilah-h
The others:@power @calyhuge  @whalekeeper  @theducktator  @elishavet-pidyon @the_lost-journal @trailblazer  @jonas @beth-torres @euodia-vision @thearcaneaxiom @smiley  @freed_and_redeemed @loopylin @felicity @hybridlore
You also gave me the feeling of a girl who loves old books and antiques…sort of like an 18’s librarian.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I always imagined you with a violin and kind of looking like Lindsey Stirling since that was the first profile image I saw of you…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Is there supposed to be something special about Julian’s eyes? He gets 2Â close-ups of his blue irises…they’re blue, right?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
There’s also a lot of archery.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Oh oh. Who is that shadowy masked fellow? The villain of the story?
Oh yes…I didn’t read your other two books…so I don’t have anything to say except…you killed a character. So sad. And yet, glad.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I was just planning to get to that! So…you have ship in it??!!! Cool! Maybe a Paul scene? (These are my random thoughts…)
Uh oh…I see an arena…don’t tell me they get thrown into that…and wolves…*gulp* hopefully, they’re nice wolves?? I always love nice wolf characters…I see a lot of young children…oh, someone…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Yes…I got that feel after a while. (that you were only sparring)
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
oh it was super tough. I decided that you had brown hair, a friendly, cheerful, slightly more outgoing personality. Loved animals, lived in the country, and liked western/countryish style clothing.
You’re actually correct on all those things except the brown hair! Good deductions!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Haha. I was more riled up about the insult to my brothers, not to me. haha!
I kind of thought so.
And I believe the Scottish jab was a playful one. *shrug* I have no hard feelings towards him, and he has none towards me.
I was still really new to KP…so I wasn’t sure at that time…I was thinking, “Woah…that was intense.”😂
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
I think it was, because I was trying to guess what you were like based on your profile pic.
Really? So, what did you think about me and how I was like?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
Well, he was talking about gross things brothers do to their sisters…and you were like, “N-O. My brothers do not do that. They’re trained to be gentlemen.”
I thought a real fight was going on (Power insulted your Scottish heritage) until some amends were made between you two. *whew* It was greatly relieving.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 2 months ago
That was you? I can’t remember if you were the one who helped me…it may have been that though.
Where I first remember meeting you more was during the Short Story Contest War. I was like, “I like this girl!” Scottish…your firey debate with Power…your writings…
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