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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
Okay, great! I’m glad you felt that difference.
Yes…Jace is the youngest. Everyone else is in their twenties or thirties…Jace is the only one with the word “teen” in his age. Everyone views him like their little brother.
Guy… we didn’t really get much there, but I got the impression he is haunted by his past. Lol…
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 3 days ago
Yes! I’m planning, Lord willing, to write a book with these guys in it.
I did notice a few times that some words you used were either typos or not words at all (or words I’d never seen.)
Thanks. I think I caught all of those.The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more w…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 5 days ago
The story:
Starlit Night
A Refuge Rangers Short Story
“When was the last time you ate squirrel, Jace?”
Zahn looked up from his third stanza to spot Kyler poking a blackened rodent over the fire. Jace sat on the opposite side of the fire, scribbling away in his leather book. His blond head barely lifted at Kyler’s question.
“You mean th…[Read more]
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Liberty started the topic Critique for my first RR Short Story in the forum Short Story Critiques 1 week, 5 days ago
@elishavet-pidyon @theducktator @keilah-h @hybridlore
Hello girls! I recently completed my first short story from Refuge Rangers! I thought I’d tag you since you’ve all been reviewing the guys moodboards. Here’s an glimpse of their characters in a story! Burd isn’t there…and I’ve yet to post about Zahn and Keiden. But I will soon! Lord…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 weeks ago
Oh no! Oops. Well, you can go with Beatrice. She is really bossy.
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 weeks ago
I picked Beatrice because she wasn’t not wise in picking nail polish for her team…it was just for herself! That was pretty selfish. I wanted to pick Pawel for immunity…but he wasn’t one of the options. I chose Jayden next because he seemed kind and worked together with his team.
Oh! I didn’t get that part…okay, here are…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 weeks ago
Ahh!!! I loved the part when Buddy gave the frisbee back! I was cheering my boy all the way. And when the Sirens decided not to cheat. Pawel sounds like a great character. Kyomi is terrible! I wish I could vote her out.
Elimination: E
Immunity: 4
Challenge: Z!!! (This game is so much fun in real life)
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 weeks, 1 day ago
I may not be that active, but I can vote still.
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Liberty replied to the topic The diamond game. in the forum Film 3 weeks, 2 days ago
“YUCK! Why are our cookies so salty!?” Sebastian yelled and spat the batter into the trash.
“It can’t be that bad?” Buddy tried a little of the batter and spat it into the garbage. “Your right, it’s worse than bad, it’s horrible!” Buddy gaged.
“Come on guys, I think you’re exaggerating…” Owiti stuck in his finger, tasted the ba…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month ago
Are you or anyone else from KP on CEW already? I’m on there @Liberty…but I don’t remember anyone else’s tags from CWW!
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
I FOUND IT!!!!! The instremental!!
Did you ever sing the EPIC along to the instremental?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Okay! I understand! Things can get very busy here, too.
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Ooo, there is instrumental for some of them.
SERIOUSLY??!!!!!! Send them PLEASE!
Yes, Athena’s theme is so beautiful! Wait until god Games!!!! 😱
Oh my gosh! I’ve yet to hear that one…but it’s one of my sister’s favorites…I’m am listening to that today, Lord willing!
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Liberty replied to the topic EPIC The Musical. Thoughts/rants/and more in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 month, 1 week ago
Well, I absolutley love Telemachus…and I’m starting to like Odyssyus.
My younger sister and I both love Athena’s piano theme! It’s SO beautiful. Have you ever found out if there’s an intrusmental version? Because the music is stunning!
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
@ellette-giselle @freed_and_redeemed
You girls both like EPIC?
@Ellette
Woah, I had no idea you loved it that much! I recently learned about it…I love the ending songs! The one with him and Telemachus…*crying* It was SO TOUCHING!!!! I just have a really soft spot in my heart for father and son relationships/dynamics because they are so…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
😂 Right. Writers are odd in certain things.
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
Really?! Why? I noticed some YWWs doing that…and I wondered, “Why?”
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Liberty replied to the topic Mood Boards/Aesthetics in the forum Characters 1 month, 1 week ago
He’s the spiritual one, the one that’s always reminding the other characters to trust God or to appreciate their surroundings. He loves animals and plants and being out in nature. He’s also athletic.
Spot on!
(and don’t worry, calling adult or near adult male characters “boy” is a common thing among writers)
Have you ever seen people…[Read more]
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