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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 13 hours, 51 minutes ago
Diedrich said.
Um…its Dietrich?
“I can’t get up,” Julian moaned. “I need to take my boots off.”
I love these lines!
At that moment, Leon knew what he had been missing the whole time. “Yes,” he whispered. “This is war.”
*pumping my fist in the air* This is Awesome!!
“Someone shot it at me last night.” He rose and stumbled to t…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 day, 20 hours ago
That was awesome!!! I really got sucked into the story again! I was shrinking inwardly for Leon! I thought he really was going to get whipped…again! Then when Dietrich came…I celebrated!!! So awesome!
I also like how you show Leon and Julian admonishing and encouraging the believers from the previous towns. It’s nice to…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
Wilhelm took another breath to steady himself. “My name is not Wilhelm Baumann. I am Prince Dietrich, son of Emperor Haidronias.”
That is so funny! When Wilhelm was first introduced, I actually thought, “That may be the prince…but in disguise!”
“One day, when I am Emperor, I will cleanse this land. I will destroy ever idol and t…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 2 days, 1 hour ago
“Careful?” Leon laughed. “Julain, I never thought those words would cross your lips.”
😂
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 1 hour ago
*squealing with excitement* I can’t wait to hear about it!
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 2 hours ago
Wait…is this the second book in the CR series? Or a new story you haven’t told me about?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 18 hours ago
you are insufferable.
Why thank you!
CALLED IT!!
As I was editing I was like….. this is going to be her favorite character!
*sheepish grin* I guess you know how to write a “Liberty’s favorite character” now.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 4 days, 19 hours ago
that’s all you have to say about that section?!?!
*nod*
Oh, and…Dietrich sounds like a very interesting character. I hope you don’t kill him since I like him.
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 5 days, 1 hour ago
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 13 hours ago
It could also be said Helen with the “e” still added.
Phew! I’m so relieved.
Shy. Rather a bit of a coward sometimes. Didn’t want to ever draw attention to himself. Relied on Julian as spokesman and decision maker. Very quiet. Never, ever did anything that went against what others were doing.
Interesting! My Adrian is kind of li…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 17 hours ago
I forgot…is Leon and Julian writing in the same journal? Or do they each have their own?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 6 days, 17 hours ago
Good morning!!! You’re bright and early! Normally Hybridlore is my first reader. Looks like you got her place! 😂
😄
Oh wait…Helene is said like He-leen?
Oh, come on! Adrian wasn’t always dead. I would like to know what he was like when he was alive on earth.
Speaking of Adrians, have you ever read “Lysbeth”?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
*squeals with delight over a new treasure*
Erich and his wife Helene are such a sweet couple, and Erich has the makings of a strong leader.
*dances around the room*
I am SO stealing that name from you!!!!!!! I have a Helen in my story…but I never thought of spelling it like that! It fits my character so much more to add an…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Cool!!! I really liked the idea of a Daniel twist. Plus, it gives me Narnia fkashbacks with Shasta in the desert. That just makes me happy. 😊
Yes! I was reminded of Shasta as well!
But why do you like him over Rolf’s other friends??! (I mean, I like him best, but I know his entire story. You just saw a tiny bit of i…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Another thing:
Why is it that bad guys always seem to ride black horses?
“Because, God has called me to bring the message of salvation to my people,” Rolf replied.
Hmmm…I thought you were going to take the story to where God had called those two to stay there and evangelize that area…but I guess not.
Leon smirked, havi…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week ago
Neat! I loved the part of when the lion came to rescue them. As soon as I read about that lion I knew it was there to protect them!!!! That happened to a character of mine as well.
Hmm…the part when they got tied in the dessert gave me flashbacks of Leiand.
And…*crying* You killed another one of my favorite characters! Why…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Who are the moderators?
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Liberty replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 1 week, 4 days ago
Woah. I’ve not read your books yet…but man, this sounds very interesting! Oh on…Franz…isn’t that the bad guy I asked you about? Poor Riker! From all that I’ve read about him…he’s always facing fear from his past…
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
By the way, in The War to End All Wars, the guy actually gave his life to the other man. It was so sad…the story is about these American soldiers who are captured by the Japanese.
I don’t remember all the details, but one of the prisoners was caught doing something…and he and two other men were going to be executed. But the…[Read more]
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Liberty replied to the topic The Flames of Hope Saga Book 3: Land of Shadows in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 week, 4 days ago
So, this is really cazy because I never thought this scene was one of my best!! 😂
It’s a stunning scene! I LOVE it!!
I’m so happy! I posted it and I was like, “Liberty’s gonna love this!!!”
You were so right!
So, what do you think of Kareem and his story???!
I really like him, and he’s very intriguing. He sounds like a charact…[Read more]
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