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Esther replied to the topic WIP Idea?? in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 3 years, 6 months ago
I love this story idea!! 😄
I don’t think I really have any suggestions at the moment. 🙃
I would imagine Kuyper with extra dirty blond hair, blue (or hazel) eyes, a little taller than most girls her age, and thinner too.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Wow, your writing is AWESOME! The idea is really cool, and I love the names! I thought the dialogue was great, actually. And I do not know who was getting beat up in the first part, so please don’t tell me XD
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Allison replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Wow! I love it!!! It is so realistic and just pulls you in!
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Starshiness posted an update 3 years, 6 months ago
YALLLLLLLL CHAPTER ONE OF RAVEN’S QUEST IS UP!!!!!! I’d love if you’d give it a read and lmk what you think <3
@euodia-vision @freedomwriter76 @acancello @kyronthearcanin @awsumfaith @landric @keilah-h @janellebelovedpig
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Starshiness replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 😭😭😭 YES WE DO, poor boy gets beat on way too much *sob*
@esther-c Thank you!!! <3
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Starshiness replied to the topic Once Upon A Time My Story Began in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
@crocheter12 STOP THAT’S IMPRESSIVE!!!
Like seriously, I have so much respect for the people who just go ahead and get their books/stories published while I’m over here underestimating myself and rewriting and never being satisfied with my edits and good gracious, the cycle never ends XD. I am entertaining the idea of compiling and publishing a…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Hey, it's been a while. ~ Chat Space in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Welcome back!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, fiction-writing, teen girl!!
(I really have to shorten my introduction… 🤔😂)
I don’t have a blog, but I’ve considered starting one. 🙂
Oooh, I like this question. What’s my WIP about… Well, it’s a trilogy called the Endox…[Read more]
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Esther replied to the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
Ahh, I love it!! 😆
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
NEVER played Mario??? Really? Not even once? Man, I grew up playing mario. We had the new stuff and the original Nintendo (my dad may have known every secret in the game, as it was made during his childhood XD)
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Somehow I managed not to see this until now… I’ve done that twice in the past two days! 🤦♀️
Doing well! Yeah, I know XD. I would ask you like a thousand questions, but we’ll go with just a couple lol.
What’s you WIP about? I feel like maybe I’ve heard of it (you might even have told me lol I have a terrible memory lol)…[Read more]
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Starshiness replied to the topic Hiya Hannah here:)) in the forum Start HERE 3 years, 6 months ago
@hannahn Hey there, welcome to KP! I’m Starshiness, also one of the many previously homeschooled students on the site 🥳 (I will be attending my freshman year of college this upcoming fall), and like the rest I am obsessed with writing fictional worlds, characters, and speaking messages through my writing.
Ooo Christian romance is a great genre!…[Read more]
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Starshiness started the topic Raven's Quest, I'M FINALLY SHARING IT in the forum Novel Critique Requests 3 years, 6 months ago
This has been looooong overdue, I bet some of y’all were starting to wonder if I really did have a WIP after all XD but here it is! Chapter 1 of Raven’s Quest! I have six chapters written, with the second and third being the most polished… I will say I know my dialogue needs work, so any critiques at all (but especially watch for that!) will be…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
Alright!
@landric (oooh I want to read those now XD) @awsumfaith
Thanks so much for the advice!!! I’m definitely going to be working on just putting all my ideas together and then narrowing it down like that. It should at least help me figure out what I want to focus on in the story for sure.
Thanks again!!! 🙂
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Allison posted an update 3 years, 6 months ago
@loopylin @felicity (I think it was you guys who were talking about it 🙂 )
Ok, I did it. I tried watermelon on pizza. I was so happy we were having that for dinner, I super badly wanted to try it! At first I was like, this combo might be to, what’s the word? Liquidy? Wet? Weird? But I took a bit of both together and I was seriously surprised. It…[Read more]-
@acancello Lol It’s actually good?? I’ve never tried it. It was just a joke, but now I actually want to try it. I can’t actually remember how the joke started.
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@loopylinI think you were talking about your characters favorite food- watermelon on pizza- and I was thinking “Hey that might actually be good 🤪” So I tried it and would definitely recommend it 😁!
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Oh wow, you really tried it?! You’re brave! XD
Jonathan is going to be so proud of you!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) started the topic Any Ideas? in the forum Plotting 3 years, 6 months ago
I’ll just tag who I can remember right now XD
@thearcaneaxiom @princesachronicle @keilah-h @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @crocheter12 @hybridlore @awsumfaith @godlyfantasy12 @landric @mineralizedwritings @whalekeeper @everyone-i-forgot-i’m-drawing-a-blank-lol
Alright! So, the thing with plotting…
I try. I really do. But… I’m naturally a…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Villain Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Totally, go ahead! Some of our characters aren’t purely villains, so yours should fit fine. As far as I can tell there are a lot of antiheroes.
Oooh, I’ve seen some of Hans! XD I don’t like him obviously but he’s written well. Can’t wait to see him in the RP! 😉
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh, cool! Yeah, I love the movie too!
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Lol, XD Yes, it’s soooo good!! 😆😂
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Esther replied to the topic The Chat Chat in the forum General Writing Discussions 3 years, 6 months ago
Oh my word, really?? That’s awesome!! It’s so good!!
It’s actually based off of a book called Hadassah by Tommy Tenney. It’s an adult novel and I read it when I was like 10 or 11. (Which I probably shouldn’t have. XD) But I can’t remember what’s in it exactly, so I’m not entirely sure about content. There is a YA adaption thoug…[Read more]
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Ooooh, cool! I’m there!
Yayyy tyyy
Cool!! Where is it?
Under Novel Critique Requests, the most recent topic created 😁
Awesome! I saw it.
Haven’t gotten to read it yet but I will when I can!
👍🏽💕
Ahhhhh so exciting! Where would I find it?
Wait, just saw your reply to someone else…
Whoohoo! I just read it! Very nice. I’m excited to follow the journey!