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@hybridlore

I can’t really think of anything right now, but I’ll definitely think it over and get back to you on it!

@rae

Sounds good!! I love your style, btw. It’s fresh and unique. 😊

@savannah_grace2009

I don’t think it’s too clunky. There may be a few places where it could be made a little smoother, but I’m not sure how to fix that. 😅 If this is just your first or second draft, then I think it’s definitely fine how it is. 🙂

@savannah_grace2009 (Ok, awesome!) @grcr @rae @trailblazer @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @acancello

Hedieh

As Hedieh twirled around the room with Amir, she couldn’t help but smile. This was so much fun. As the music slowly stopped, Hedieh sighed and let her hands fall to her sides. “You caught on pretty quickly.”

“That doesn’t mean it w…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Oh and you asked for the plot 🤦🏻‍♀️ Oops. XD Here’s the blurb for the trilogy:

They’ve been trapped inside The Orb for twenty years. It covered all of Aletheia. But it slowly closes in on the nation. The people stuck inside have no way to communicate to those outside. Families are separated. But the people have gotten used to…

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@savannah_grace2009

Thanks so much!!

Yeah, for sure! I do have the first draft of the first book posted somewhere on here, but it’s changed a lot since then. I’m actually planning to post the third draft as I edit it soon.

@savannah_grace2009

Ok, Marcurious sounds like a really cool character. 😁

@euodia-vision

Aww, thanks girl! I guess I haven’t really shared much writing on here lately. But I’ve started on the first draft of the second book, so I’ve been getting a lot more actual writing done. (Instead of just editing… editing… editing… 😂)

@savannah_grace2009

Do you mind if Hedieh finds Ottoline? Because she hasn’t really interacted with any of the other girls yet.

@spinnner4him

I love the theme and the story idea!! The only thing I’d be careful about is making the plot cliched. Some cliches aren’t bad it’s just something to look out for, especially on this story idea. But I also don’t know how you’re planning to go about writing it, or the actual details of the plot. Anyway, if you post anything about it…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009 @grcr

These look awesome, you guys!!

@spinner4him

It sounds really interesting! I’d think I’d have to know a little bit more to make any suggestions, since this is just the blurb, but it sounds awesome!

As for title ideas… I have no idea. XD The others’ suggestions are good. I’m terrible at coming up with titles. 😂

@mineralizedwritings

Aww, I love that!! Tauren and Lesli’s dynamic is one of my favorites. 🥰

@savannah_grace2009

I’d love to read the next part!!

@rae

I like it! I’d say just spend some time developing his character more if you aren’t sure what you want to go for yet. I develop characters by creating their personality and such, then writing…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Thank ya!!

Everton: (tbh, his is probably my most favorite moodboard that I’ve ever made. XD)

Yesss, another moodboard topic!! XD

I have so so many. But for now I’ll just post the moodboards for my MCs

Amidala:

@mineralizedwritings

Ikr? 😂

@trailblazer

Thanks!! 😊

@keilah-h

Oooh, sounds cool!

@freedomwriter76 @spinner4him @hybridlore @keilah-h @smiley @mineralizedwritings @euodia-vision @anyone-else-because-I-probably-missed-a-ton-of-people-XD

Here are chapters three and four of the second book in my trilogy, with the working title Through the Forge. For those of you who know who he is, this is when Adrian is first introduced…[Read more]

@everyone

Wow, so I haven’t been active on this RP in forever. I have no idea where I left off. So I’ll try to write an RP later today so my charries can interact with some of yours. If I remember right, the characters I have in here are Amidala, Everton, Fynn, Callista, Lukas, and Derek.