LandriC

@hybridlore

Yeah, I didn’t get an email for yours either. But then again, KP has been kind of weird lately XD

Thanks so much!!! I was actually kind of worried about this chapter, so that’s awesome!

Lol I think cliffhangers are my way of forcing myself to write the next chapter, because even I want to know what happens next. XD the motivation of…[Read more]

@crocheter12

Oooh the fairy tales made modern one looks cool, too… I love twists on fairy tales, but I’ve never tried them myself.

(I’ll admit, I’ve never read any Shakespeare, but the book about Mary looks cool too 🙂)

@starshiness

*after stalking XD* From what I’ve seen of your writing, I bet your poetry is/would be great! I don’t know…[Read more]

@keilah-h Awesome, thx! Yea no worries, take your time, there’s a lot there and more to come still lol.

@freedomwriter76 XDXD I meant there’s worse to come lolllll

I died laughingggg lolll it was just your choice of using that term to avoid saying his name that for some reason was so funny to me XDXD

Y’all…. I feel like this is just a representation of my success rates with editing… right after I post this chapter I decide to overhaul a section of it and make it flow so much better, but ofc it’s only AFTER I’ve posted this XD

@acancello Thank you so much!! <3

@kyronthearcanin Ahhhh thank youuuuu! Really!! I’m so glad, I know it gets choppy in some later chapters and it’s so hard to properly evaluate your own writing when you’ve seen it and read it over so many times. Ooh ok ok I won’t spill the beans 🤫🤐

@freedomwriter76 OMW REALLY ALREADY?!?!!! Girl you ain’t seen…[Read more]

@landric

I love this story idea!! 😄

I don’t think I really have any suggestions at the moment. 🙃

I would imagine Kuyper with extra dirty blond hair, blue (or hazel) eyes, a little taller than most girls her age, and thinner too.

@starshiness

Wow, your writing is AWESOME! The idea is really cool, and I love the names! I thought the dialogue was great, actually. And I do not know who was getting beat up in the first part, so please don’t tell me XD

@starshiness

Wow! I love it!!! It is so realistic and just pulls you in!

@godlyfantasy12 😭😭😭 YES WE DO, poor boy gets beat on way too much *sob*

@esther-c Thank you!!! <3

@crocheter12 STOP THAT’S IMPRESSIVE!!!

Like seriously, I have so much respect for the people who just go ahead and get their books/stories published while I’m over here underestimating myself and rewriting and never being satisfied with my edits and good gracious, the cycle never ends XD. I am entertaining the idea of compiling and publishing a…[Read more]

@annabelle

Welcome back!! I’m Esther: a volleyball-playing, violin-squeaking, dog-obsessed, homeschooled, God-loving, fiction-writing, teen girl!!

(I really have to shorten my introduction… 🤔😂)

I don’t have a blog, but I’ve considered starting one. 🙂

Oooh, I like this question. What’s my WIP about… Well, it’s a trilogy called the Endox…[Read more]

@starshiness

Ahh, I love it!! 😆

@euodia-vision

NEVER played Mario??? Really? Not even once? Man, I grew up playing mario. We had the new stuff and the original Nintendo (my dad may have known every secret in the game, as it was made during his childhood XD)

@mineralizedwritings

Somehow I managed not to see this until now… I’ve done that twice in the past two days! 🤦‍♀️

Doing well! Yeah, I know XD. I would ask you like a thousand questions, but we’ll go with just a couple lol.

What’s you WIP about? I feel like maybe I’ve heard of it (you might even have told me lol I have a terrible memory lol)…[Read more]

@hannahn Hey there, welcome to KP! I’m Starshiness, also one of the many previously homeschooled students on the site 🥳 (I will be attending my freshman year of college this upcoming fall), and like the rest I am obsessed with writing fictional worlds, characters, and speaking messages through my writing.

Ooo Christian romance is a great genre!…[Read more]

@folith-feolin

Alright!

@landric (oooh I want to read those now XD) @awsumfaith

Thanks so much for the advice!!! I’m definitely going to be working on just putting all my ideas together and then narrowing it down like that. It should at least help me figure out what I want to focus on in the story for sure.

Thanks again!!! 🙂