Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@kyronthearcanin

I am. I know @keilah-h is as well. That would be three of us, so even if @lydibug and @loopylin don’t want to, that should still be enough.

@freedomwriter76 aww that’s sad!

@kyronthearcanin hey, haven’t seen you in a while!!

@kyronthearcanin

oh, lol 😅 I see.

@kyronthearcanin

😮 …you wrote a ton…

@esther-c @savannah_grace2009 @grcr @whalekeeper @trailblazer @smiley @hanako @walkbyfaith @ellie-wingfeather @mcmuffin @mineralizedwritings @freedomwriter76 @kyronthearcanin

Does anyone on here have Kindle Unlimited? If so, do you have any good, clean book recs that are on there?

@kyronthearcanin

Okay, I’ll think about it! No problem, thank you!

@kyronthearcanin

So, yep! Mostly just because of the curfew. I guess I was trying to show how the villagers were impacted by it, if that makes sense.
That’s true, I might use that word a lot XD. I’ll have to reread it and see where I can change words around to fix that. Thanks for pointing that out!
Yeah, I get that. I’m not really sure how the…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Nice XD I mean, they’re aliens, it’s okay lol.

Exactly, it’s hard XD Cause that one word works so well there, but you’ve already used it 🤦

@kyronthearcanin

Ohhh, gotcha, it was dyed xD.

Oh man, I think all writers must xD Or just everyone in general. Sometimes I’ll be reading and I’m like, wait, didn’t they just use that word in the last paragraph? Maybe our brains can only hold so many words at one time so we just end up using the same ones to describe things XD

@kyronthearcanin Wow, blue hair?? XD Yeah, I would like to pay more attention to it so that my characters are more different, so I thought it would be fun to see what everyone on here does. Looks like you’ve done a pretty good job on it though!😅

@rae

Cool! Yeah, it’s funny how our characters kind of reflect different parts of ourselves. And…[Read more]

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CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different…

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Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.

CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
Mandin adjusted the thick band to the satchel over his…

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(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]

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@mineralizedwritings if you have time

“A little child dashed in without a knock and practically shouted, ‘I heard you got a new sword with a dragon head on it!’ His eyes reminded me of a dragon and I found it amusing that this child did not seem to mind…

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@spinner4him

Alright, I might as well post the second chapter now. I’m not entirely sure about this one, and I think it needs to be a bit longer, but it helps clear up a bit of the fog from the first chapter, at least I hope so. Can’t wait to…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin

Here’s where my problem lies: I need to show small details (a well outside the city, the slums, different districts, etc.) but drawing each individual building and block and street is IMPOSSIBLE since it’s a huge city! So what do you guys think I should do?

Should I omit these details altogether or is there a way…[Read more]