Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

CHAPTER 6-ON BOARD THE NIGHTMARE
Nahim was alone and unbothered for the first time in a while. He ran his right hand over his sling for his left arm but didn’t try to move the shoulder. He was different…

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@hybridlore @power @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Next chapter…I’m just going to post most of my chapters now since I plan to change some of them soo, but want some feedback.

CHAPTER 5-MASTER PAUL
Mandin adjusted the thick band to the satchel over his…

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(Uhhh, has anyone noticed that @sarafini has vanished? All her past posts say anonymous now… Did she just leave?)

Ok, here’s the third chapter! It may be the last I post of it for a while if at all, but we’ll…[Read more]

@hybridlore @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

@mineralizedwritings if you have time

“A little child dashed in without a knock and practically shouted, ‘I heard you got a new sword with a dragon head on it!’ His eyes reminded me of a dragon and I found it amusing that this child did not seem to mind…

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@spinner4him

Alright, I might as well post the second chapter now. I’m not entirely sure about this one, and I think it needs to be a bit longer, but it helps clear up a bit of the fog from the first chapter, at least I hope so. Can’t wait to…[Read more]

@thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin

Here’s where my problem lies: I need to show small details (a well outside the city, the slums, different districts, etc.) but drawing each individual building and block and street is IMPOSSIBLE since it’s a huge city! So what do you guys think I should do?

Should I omit these details altogether or is there a way…[Read more]

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

I’m not going to bother with italics this time, they always come out wring. Anyway, this is the fourth chapter, but I’m going to warn you that I may drastically change part of this chapter, so…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin Sure XD

@savannah_grace2009

I know nothing about this, lol, but I’ll just tag @kyronthearcanin again XD… she might have some tips for you.

@hybridlore @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @kyronthearcanin @jonas @mineralizedwritings @loopylin @whalekeeper @anyone-else-who-might-have-slight-interest

Again,

If I just tagged you and you aren’t interested, feel free to go away.

If you’re still around, and haven’t read the first and second chapter, look up. If you’re still around and you…[Read more]

@jonas

So, I decided to create a doc and just put all the characters I’ve created into it and do the questionnaire for each of them in there, but one thing I realized is that this questionnaire doesn’t necessarily work for non-major characters. Side characters aren’t supposed to be super fleshed out, they’re supposed to be flat, so which questio…

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@kyronthearcanin

Okay! XD good! I’m glad it wasn’t annoying you, cause it was a lot of tags XD

Gotcha, yeah. Totally understand that.

@kyronthearcanin

lol! Thats how I’m feeling… I might have to share side characters or something….

@kyronthearcanin

I shall remember the paragraph thing! Funny, just a minute ago, I had someone say almost the same thing after I emailed hr my short story!

Thoughts are in italics on my Word document, just they didn’t stay there, when I copied and pasted.

You have no idea how happy it makes me feel when someone says they want to read the next…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Thanks for the tag!! You’re really saving me there XD I hope to be more active, especially once I leave YWW. (:

No problem XD hopefully it wasn’t getting annoying, I just keep seeing things that I’m like, “Oh Ava does that!” or whatever, so yeah XD. When are you leaving YWW?

@rae

That was really good! I’m super interested to s…[Read more]

@hybridlore @acancello @smiley @thearcaneaxiom @kyronthearcanin @esther-c @rae

Hi y’all, I have a couple of questions, and as it seems that you have all been here for longer than I, I’m hoping that you can answer them.

#1: What are ranks? I’ve seen different ones under everybody’s profile, and I was just wondering what they are.

#2: Where would…[Read more]

@rae

Okay, I was just making sure! Hmm…. yeah, I would just tag anyone you know/people who asked about your WIP, but of course you don’t have to. It just helps them to see it.

I know that @loopylin and @kyronthearcanin write science fiction, so maybe they would be interested to read it? Sorry, I don’t know who you’ve met yet. Or maybe @whalekee…[Read more]

@esther-c @freedomwriter76 @euodia-vision @smiley @whalekeeper @kyronthearcanin @savannah_grace2009 @rae @highscribeofaetherium @jonas @spinner4him @aranel