Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@linus-smallprint

I think we are almost two thirds in?

Okay, sounds good. If needed, you can always catch up after your break.

@ellette-giselle @whalekeeper @keilah-h @linus-smallprint (Hey, do you still want to be tagged on this since I know you’re taking a break soon?) @theducktator

New chapters are out!

@ellette-giselle

I think the first chapter works pretty well! There was a bit of space in between Jonathan’s time in school and him talking to his brother that sort of felt like filler, but I’m not really sure what else you could put there so it might be fine for a first chapter to introduce the characters and the world.

One note: I was very…[Read more]

@liberty

Wow, I really liked reading this! Are you planning to use the characters in a novel?

The POVs seemed pretty different, I think. Obviously, the longer we spend with the characters, the more we’ll get to know them and see their differences, but I got the impression that Zahn was the peacemaker, Kyler likes to tease and instigate things,…[Read more]

@savannah_grace2009

Yeah, that’s understandable. I’m sorry 😢 🤗 But hopefully you have a great time at camp! I’ll continue to pray for you guys!

I’ve been doing pretty good! Just started math again so I can finish my class by next year. So… yeah. 😅

@theducktator Praying!

@koshka Who are they? Astronauts? Fighter pilots?

Either way the boards look awesome!

@savannah_grace2009

One of my youngest friends has cancer. ♥️ It sucks. Don’t let it push people out even if it becomes a normal in your life.

@ellette-giselle
Sounds good to me! Once I catch up with Linus’ work, I can help here, although I may stop at some point to make time for summer activities.
What kind of editing do you want? Super detailed? (Since you said this is several drafts in.) Just a quick read through?

@ellette-giselle awww that’s a shame! I echo Linus here, no one was hurt right?

@the_lost-journal

How did they go?

@savannah_grace2009 How are you doing?

@freed_and_redeemed awww that was really cute.

@ellette-giselle you’re welcome!

@ellette-giselle I’m up for grammar/spellcheck!

Also to figure out what it was your siblings loved so much about the book.

@whalekeeper yours are so wacky lol

all righty I got a bunch:

Chameleon woman joins a team of deranged human-animal hybrids and discovers they’ve all been made pawns in a plot spanning a century. Meanwhile, crocodile man desperately trying to hide his minor self-esteem issues wages a private war with everything, but mostly his own emotions.

Dragon-man from an unruly city…[Read more]

Bruhhh I should totally do this!! My stories have no shortage of weird.

Keep in mind that very few of them have names though.

@savannah_grace2009

Aahh, okay. My theory was in vain!

@grcr

I want to know where the boy’s shirt comes from, it’s quite amusing to me. 🙂

A walking echo becomes friends with a kid who is generationally traumatized by suitcases and green haired women.

A new god learns what office life is like, falls in love with a Volkswagen bus, and spirals in the complexities of self fulfillment.

A woman afraid of Picasso-style art teams up with a boy to figure out why his face is so flat,…[Read more]

I like y’all’s, they’re pleasantly confusing and intriguing. XD