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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
@thearcanaxiom
All these characters are so good! Oh man, these are kind of characters that if they ever actually died, I would be super, really, really sad lol. I am curious to how Liren and Kirrtes met. (Hmmm. But only he knows. So would you know? Oh wait, you meant in the book…)
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
I would love to!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Wow! That sounds so cool!
You really thought that out a lot, and I enjoyed reading it. I’ve until now been more of a pantser, though I’ve always enjoyed worldbuilding, and have started to dive into it more recently.
The council appeared because of the war, yes.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
There was a war, in which the Lupinari and the Serpenree nearly wiped each other out. It was before Dragor became king of the Serpenree, so he himself never actually agreed to it, and probably never would have. The council, anticipating that someday another ruler would try to take over, made the four-planet rule.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Okay now I KNOW I like him XD. Especially the quote from Winston Churchill!
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Alright, so for the legal system, there is what they call the Orythian Council (Orythia is most likely going to be their solar system). It is made up of two representatives from each kingdom on every planet. They usually decide the laws, though they have to be approved by at least four planets to go through. I can try to answer…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh, Ireland would be cool, too!
We don’t have a lot of forests where I live. We’re kind of just surrounded by farmers’ fields, so I guess I’ll have to find somewhere that does. Oooh… What about a forest in the mountains? That would be perfect! 😄
Yes, Dune is very fun to write. No one really ever knows what he’s about to do &…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oooh hard decision lol. Out of those, I’d probably be most interested in the characters, languages, and cultures, since I’m working on incorporating that into my own writing.
Also, wish me luck! I’ll be gone from one to three playing music for the school I used to go to. 🙂
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Does anyone else like to write song spoofs? in the forum Music 1 year, 8 months ago
@artsy-dragon @ folith-feolin
I don’t have a lot of changed-up songs written down, but here is one of the poem-ish songs I wrote (Sorren sings it in my book, at least eventually). It might not make a whole lot of sense because you haven’t read it, but I think it turned out okay. 🙂
The trees stand tall and strong,
And the snow whispers in our…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Does anyone else like to write song spoofs? in the forum Music 1 year, 8 months ago
Awesome! I play guitar, so I usually come up with a rhythm and some chords and just go for it lol.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Oooh those are some good ones. I kind of guessed the Isaiah one lol 😄
There is a group that decides what is and isn’t legal. I’ll get back to you later, because I have some schoolwork to get done lol. I agree that it is very optimistic, and I’m probably going to work on a better system, too.
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Does anyone else like to write song spoofs? in the forum Music 1 year, 8 months ago
Oh gosh I randomly rewrite songs all the time lol. I rewrote 7 Years, if anyone knows that song, and made it just about stories haha. Mainly I just write songs to go in my books. My character Sorren kind of surprises everyone with an awesome singing voice they never knew about, so… I wrote a song for him to sing, and now I want to…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks! I worked really hard on it. 🙂
I’d love to hear more about your WIPs (if you are okay with that, of course)!
Random question. What’s your favorite Bible verse/verses? Mine are Psalms 139:7-12, if you were wondering lol.
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Gwyndalf the Wise and Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) are now friends 1 year, 8 months ago
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Thanks for all the great advice! 😄
For your first point, that makes a lot of sense, and I’ll look into it.
Second, yes, there are earth-like creatures in my world, but I think I’m going to add twists to some of them (not quite sure what that means yet lol). Rina, though she can’t remember the name, used to live in a town called…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic My WIP in the forum Novel Critique Requests 1 year, 8 months ago
Thank you so much! The chapter was really fun to write! 😄
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
It’s so nice to meet you!
I know I have some WIPs I want to go back to… They’re buried around here somewhere! 😅
Alright, now for your questions!
1. Any other country… Good question! I’m going to have to go with Israel, I think? Because I would get to see some of the places where Jesus walked!
2. My favorite part of nature would…[Read more]
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hey, Writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
Nice to meet you! Romance is not a skill of mine, I’ve got to admit, but your genres sound amazing! (I am a fantasy/sci-fi person myself, so those sound interesting!)
Here’s my question: Who are your favorite characters that you’ve written?
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Ava Murbarger (Solfyre) replied to the topic Hello, fellow writers! in the forum Start HERE 1 year, 8 months ago
No problem! 🙂
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