Ava Murbarger (Solfyre)

@hybridlore

Oh, and yes I’m nearly done with the next chapter. 😅🤣

@hybridlore

Yeah, I’m definitely looking for critiques! My first drafts especially need it XD

The scene on top of the ship may have been a little muddled because it was the first time I was actually figuring out what the top of the ship was going to look like instead of what I was actually writing. XD I do that a lot. Anyway, yeah, I’ll d…[Read more]

@keilah-h @landric @thearcaneaxiom @gwyndalf-the-wise @hybridlore

Alright, here’s chapter… 7? Lol. Yeah it is. Feels longer cause they’re all so long… XD

Chapter 7

As morning comes to our side of Aavian, I sit out on the wing of the ship while rain pours down. Dark clouds loom overhead, sending branching lightning down to grasp for the…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I think it would be perfectly fine! I mean, like you said, it’s your book. On top of that, I’ve read plenty of books that change up creatures from mythology, or the events that happened in their legends. I doubt you’d get a whole lot of people complaining about the difference being inaccurate either way.

For example, Sirens have…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

I don’t know what any of it is, at least not really, so don’t feel bad XD

@sarafini

I might try this sometime if I get the time. We’ll just have to see lol

@hybridlore

I definitely will!

And, yeah… I have the same problem. Sry I don’t know how either XD

Not my first, no. This will be my… fifth move? But most of the others were when I was little, because we lived in our last house for like eight years, lol.

And yeah, I love httyd! Toothless is the best XD

@gwyndalf-the-wise

No problem!

@hybridlore

Alrighty, I’m going to tag some people now XD. I usually forget to, lol

@gwyndalf-the-wise @thearcaneaxiom @landric @awsumfaith @smiley @esther-c @freedomwriter76 @loopylin @mineralizedwritings @godlyfantasy12 @keilah-h @all-those-i-have-forgotten

@hybridlore

Thanks so much XD! Don’t worry I did some stalking myself when I first came 🤣. I am going to post more eventually, I just hadn’t read over the next chapter yet, but I think I’ll go ahead and put it up soon…

That’s cool! Yeah, I’m on the opposite side, I probably have too many WIPs… I just can’t seem to focus on one, but I’m…[Read more]

@hybridlore

So nice to meet you! Welcome to the kingdom of pen! 🙂

I’m Solfyre! I’m a homeschooler, too, about to go into highschool! 🎉 (Next week, I think. A lot of us are homeschoolers here on KP, so you’ll probably get a lot of that XD) Anyway, it’s awesome that you play violin! I can play some cello and ukelele and piano, but I mostly play…[Read more]

@starshiness

Hmmmmm…. I’ve been thinking XD

Maybe she wasn’t always a shapeshifter? Maybe the wizard made her one by accident or something, or maybe she thought she wanted it at first but now she doesn’t? My brain has decided to not remember the rest I came up with, lol, so that’s it for now.

@godlyfantasy12

Woooohoooo! I love November!

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Thanks! I’ll do the same 🙂

@sarafini

I wanna be there, but I think I’ll have to miss it. However, I am doing YWW this year, starting in May. 🎉

@awsumfaith

Ooooh, interesting XD

I like a lot of them, so hmmm…

I mean, mermaids and mermen are kind of the first thing that come to mind, but I can’t say I’ve used them much. They kind of creep me out sometimes, lol. If anyone has seen any of that puss in boots show, you’ll understand

ANYWAY, moving on…

Krakens are really cool, those…[Read more]

@keilah-h

Thanks!!!

Yeah, the stakes I think should be evened out in the next chapter, so hopefully that will work.

And yeah, I love Rina’s magic! (fun fact I gave her that power because I already knew she would be kind of a medic on the battlefield, and I didn’t know a whole lot about medicine… So this way she won’t need to use it much…[Read more]

@whalekeeper

Great topic idea, btw!!! 😃

Okay, yes, so I’ve definitely noticed this in a lot of books. I do have this one book where there are a lot of parents like that, but it’s ’cause they’re all stuck up royals…. and it’s the kids too, so yeah. 😅

Anyway, yes! We definitely need more good parents!

While he doesn’t come into the story until…[Read more]

@mineralizedwritings

We have one big group and then Erich and Erebus are split off, at least right now.

@gwyndalf-the-wise

Yeah, Dune is like a cat XD The whole races thing is kind of confusing, so I get it lol

Thanks! 🙂

@godlyfantasy12

Oh, I love that scene!!! It’s so good! I just love November XD

The Silvening thing is really cool, too! 🙂

@keilah-h @thearcaneaxiom @landric @gwyndalf-the-wise

Alrighty, here’s Chapter 6! I’m not completely sure about this one… It feels right, and gets a lot of world/character building in I guess, but I’ve been told the stakes just aren’t completely there. So we’ll see XD

Chapter 6

Back on the ship, I introduce Arew to Sorren. He seems…[Read more]