KydonAndWillow

@acancello @janellebelovedpig @mineralizedwritings @starshiness @godlyfantasy12 @kyrontheracanin

Oooh, so I don’t have any ideas for the next part of the story, but I think the boy should be named Griffin or Silas. I can’t choose which. 😛

@godlyfantasy12

Ooooh, I’d be down for the boarding school idea. 😄 It’d be really fun!!

@freedomwriter76

Ev

“Get called on a lot, Ev, don’t you?” Tony asked, as they got situated in the back row. “That’s why you know you don’t get called on in the back.” He pulled out his books, calculator, and other items needed for the class.

Sam smirk…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Poor November!!! 😭😭 They do forgive him in the end… right?? 😢

@loopylin

Alright. 🙂

Derek

“Nice to meet you, Derek!” Madeline said enthusiastically. “I’m sure we’ll soon be best friends.”

Derek nodded, keeping his forced smile. He glanced over at the tall man. But maybe you and I won’t be great friends, he thought.

“Oh, that’s just Sam,” Madeline explained. “Don’t mind him. He doesn’t talk anymore. But…[Read more]

@kyronthearcanin

Looking good! I don’t think your alluding to the idea of Brycen being one of the chosen here, other than the fact that the the story is told from the perspective of the other two chosen. And using the description of draconic for Tali would further increase suspicions that she’s the dragonborn, that being now two implied…[Read more]

@janellebelovedpig

Yw!!

Oooh, awesome!! 😀

@starshiness

Thanks!!! 😄😊

Oh ok, that’s a really good point. That’s a really good idea. Thanks for the help! 😀

@kyronarcanin

Yes, I agree, awesome cliffhanger! Can’t wait to see what happens next! 😀

@freedomwriter76

Alright!

Talk to ya later!! 😀

@janellebelovedpig

Here are my ideas for punctuation. I put them all in bold.

The fear of the Lord is clean, enduring forever,

Desirable far beyond refined gold.

Thy judgments are true, righteous altogether,

Sweeter than the sweetest honeycomb.

Turning simple to wise,

Righteous, rejoicing the heart,

Purely, the light of my eyes,

Cleansing…

[Read more]

@freedomwriter76

I liked the long RP! 😁

Thx!

Ev

Ev grinned at Tony and Sam’s messing around. But he seriously considered Tony’s offer to help in math and science. Those were his weakest subjects. And if he wanted his father to be pleased, then maybe some help would be needed…

No. He wouldn’t mention anything about it… for now. He’d do just fin…[Read more]

@loopylin

Here it is!

(It is really weird for me to get used to using his first name because all my charries call him by his last name. 😂)

Derek Len

Derek eyes the two people in front of him warily. One was a girl who was the height of a child, and the other was a man probably a foot taller than Derek.

The girl smiled sweetly up at Derek.…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Exactly! Forgiveness is so important.

Janus! 😬 Oh boy.

And Ridley. I feel so bad for him! 😭 (Especially after reading his RP.) I’m glad he gets redeemed. 🙂

But I also feel so bad for Lyn. Poor girl. 😭

…

…

NoVeMbEr?!?!?!

WhAt?!

I must know more!!!

@kyronthearcanin

Haha, lol! Yeah, It makes sense that Amara would be the dragonborn because of Jade, but it seemed very likely that you were alluding to Tali, because only dragons were seen, then suddenly a human, thus, that human must be draconic in some way. I think I would personally prefer the latter if I was writing this, but I think it…[Read more]

@godlyfantasy12

Poor Ridley!! 😭

@loopylin

I love that drawing! 😂

(btw, I’ll get to the next RP later this afternoon. 🙂 )

@kyronthearcanin

Interesting, I’m really liking this so far! So a few questions I feel are becoming relevant to the story as a whole:

Are the dragons inherently evil, or are they simply a corrupt nation? What is their motives in invading Illura?

I was going to ask about who the dragonborn was, but then reading through some previous messages, I…[Read more]

@felicity

(No problem. Honestly I knew we’d differ here, (so maybe it’s my fault) especially in the question of whether or not Jesus is God, which is really important to me. I’d love to have a friendly discussion about it if you’re comfortable. If you’d rather not, I respect that too!) (AHHH. I almost forgot to put parenthesis around that. 😅…

[Read more]

@she-is-a-pirate

Question first: I’ve been toying around with a few, but
The Scarlet Freedom is a favorite or just The Freedom.

Oooh, that sounds so cool!! 😀

Question second: My favorite OC is Mr. Daniels (Scarlet’s first mate and an old family friend)
But my favorite to write is Scarlet. I think because I subconsciously put my own per…

[Read more]

@she-is-pirate

Oooh. I’d love to hear about your WIP! 😄