@koshka
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
November
Alyona’s last comment had left a bitter taste in November’s mouth. He swallowed. Hard.
He tugged at his curls anxiously, his neck starting to sweat. Who would…purposely brand someone?
Then again…November had come to learn that the world around him wasn’t all peaches and…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @keilah-h @koshka @godlyfantasy12
Ok, now I’m not sure where to take this. It’s fun any way it goes!
Alyona
Thank the Lord for Viktor. If only he could always be with her.
She hadn’t meant to draw attention their way. The situation had been frightening for a moment, but now the strange man was quiet and the Voyager’s were…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @freedomwriter76 @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Yeah, it’s totally fine. I can see why Crosshair’s rather judgmental voice is bothersome to the others; it’s kinda his natural tone, but they’re not used to it. I always say he has a “snake-like” kind of voice.
Crosshair
“Who are you asking?” Viktor snapped, narrowing his eyes. “If it…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @koshka @freedomwriter76
The Gang
Nyx’s hackles had immediately raised at Crosshair’s tone. His tired head lifted in a piercing gaze and his ears perked.
Viktor’s hand flew to his side but Lyn was too busy focusing on her companion to pay any mind to others around her.
Thankfully, Viktor eventually calmed the situa…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
I don’t know if this was how Crosshair intended it to come across as, but I’m having fun so…
Alyona
Her heart still pounding, Alyona peeked back over her brother’s shoulder.
And met Crosshair’s gaze.
She slid back but not in time; the man had seen her and was suspicious.
Viktor
“What a…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Hi, fellow weird writers… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Wingfeather Saga in the forum Book Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @queen-of-alvastia I’d be a Throne Warden, cause I’m the oldest, which is kinda cool. And my brother would eventually be king….that would be weird.
And my mom was the middle child in her family! That means she’d be queen!
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whaley replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
Thank you 🙂 It’s middle-grade fantasy. Personally, I think we need more writers writing for younger audiences. There is a lot of good stuff out there, but it’s overlooked sometimes as a genre.
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whaley replied to the topic What Are Your Favorite WIP Quotes? 🙂 in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @queen_of_alvastia @koshka
Wow, these quotes are amazing and funny and deep!! (I’d put a heart emoji here, but I don’t know how to on a keyboard XD) Thank you SO much for sharing!
I look at these, and I think… hehe… I guess my WIP takes a different approach…
1. “THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN PEANUT BUTTER!!!”
2. Alfonso’s…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@godlyfantasy12 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76
Crosshair
One boy stepped up. “I am Victor Mynclais. I hail from Yartass, a son of Eirtan.”
Crosshair had zero idea where that was. Feather would probably know, what with her knowledge of weird places, but she wasn’t here.
“My name’s Jocelyn!” piped up one of the girls, the one who…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h @freedomwriter76
Arabella
All eyes turned to focus on their group. Ara frowned at the attention and reached for November’s hand. She allowed a piece of her hair to fall over one eye, hoping to hide some of the stares.
Her anxieties had gotten better since their recent adventure with Lyn and Nyx, but the t…[Read more]
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whaley replied to the topic Hi, fellow weird writers… in the forum Start HERE 4 years, 1 month ago
Hello, and thanks for welcoming me! I would love to hear a random poem now and then 😊
C.S. Lewis is awesome! When I was little, I used to listen to the Narnia books on audio night and day – I practically had Dawn Treader memorized.
I did move here summer of 2020, so we got the brunt of the heat.
1. Oh, character, definitely, mainly…[Read more]
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Elishavet Elroi replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @keilah-h @godlyfantasy12
Ok, y’all. I’m sorry it’s been awhile. I haven’t been able to do much/anything on here this week.
All y’all’s responses are great! Now to do my part.
Alyona
From her brother’s protective shadow the scene before her looked both more and less threatening. Not that she could see much of…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka that is very sad as I must say I luv the twins
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 1 month ago
@koshka writer’s block? Or actual glitch on the site?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @keilah-h anyone on?
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Pen_for_Christ205 started the topic Please Help: I need a character to fall off a roof and survive but be realistic in the forum Plotting 4 years, 2 months ago
Hey everybody!
I haven’t been on here for some time because, well, LIFE.But I need your guys’ help on something.
So I have this character that needs to fall off a three-story roof, be generally okay, and have it be realistic. (if that’s even possible)
Could you guy please help me?
@FreedomWriter76 @KattheWriter @Elishavet Pidyon @Rylie…[Read more]
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Keilah H. replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@freedomwriter76 @koshka @elishavet-pidyon @godlyfantasy12
Ok, I’m currently writing this off the phone so forgive any mishaps in spelling, grammar, etc.
Crosshair
“Yeah, so long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So what’s your name?” asked one of the men.
Why would I try to attack you if I’m vastly outnumbered? Crosshair thought. Granted,…[Read more]
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@keilah-h u on?
@elishavet-pidyon @koshka @freedomwriter how bout y’all?
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GodlyFantasy12 replied to the topic Character Castle! in the forum General Writing Discussions 4 years, 2 months ago
@koshka @elishavet-pidyon @freedomwriter76 @keilah-h gonna go ahead and RP my charries just watching it all XD so at least they’re doing SOMETHING 🤣
Jocelyn
“Yeah. So long as you promise not to hurt anyone. So, what’s your name?”
All of the men lowered their weapons, which made the twins a bit more at ease. But not Nyx.
Which, truth be…[Read more]
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