Koshka

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Sorry y’all, I was out the the Kingdom for a awhile.

Smiley, I think it’s your turn. Would you like to go? =)

@overcomer

My style…I’m not really sure where it has come from, except that almost all the poetry I’ve read was written before the 1940’s.

The meter here is roughly 7-8 syllables with a pause of cadence in the middle of each line. The rhythm is One and TWO and Three and FOUR. I hope that helps and isn’t more confusing.

Ah, slant rhyme. I have…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

Hmm…true, true.

How do I sign up?

Random interjection of verse!!!!

Just a girl with big dreams and a heart full of Going,

Hands for the harvest and tales for the Sowing,

Awaiting her story but even then knowing-

That fields laid to follow are still part of Growing.

@livingwoodchronicles

This looks amazingly! I would love to join in, although…

My writing isn’t the very great yet, (but my sister who is reading over my shoulder just said it wasn’t bad either). I do write clean, the prose is just bumpy. I’d love to try though.

@rae

I’m not sure what to call my style, besides being metered and rhymed. I don’t know a whole lot about poetry, besides a few basic rules.

Hmm, thanks for ideas and feedback!

@savannah_grace2009

Thank you! It’s one of my best so far.

Hey y’all, I and my sister will be on off and on for the next couple of days (especially tomorrow), so that could potentially add 2 to your numbers.

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Jayson

This was awkward.

“Jayson, Rafael, which would you two prefer?” the older man turned to Raffe with a gentle smile. I glanced at my Commando In Arms (I’ll explain later, it has to do with cereal boxes).

“Well,” Raffe paused as if tasting his thoughts before serving them for general consumption. “I think you’r…[Read more]

@overcomer

Here’s the poem I’ve been struggling with. The first and fourth stanzas irritate me the most.

I also have no idea who to tag for this anymore (the last thing I submitted for critiques was some time ago) but feel free to tag anyone.

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Okay y’all, I just got off on Christmas break, so I should be able to RP consistently for a week or so, if y’all are up to getting the Leon, Elenore, Isaiah, ect. group up again.

@overcomer

Oh, I’ve done that soo many times… the interesting rabbit holes we find. I believe the last one I fell down was the difference was Scottish sayings and proverbs. I didn’t find what I was looking for, but as I now can no longer remember what that was everything is fine. XD

Ah, freeverse…

Freeverse is a thing

That I cannot…[Read more]

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

You’re fine! I had to get a college essay finished and turned in, so the delay was probably a good thing.

And I’m gonna go ahead and give their reactions.

Jayson

Jehovah, YHWH. I glanced at Raffe in time to see his eyebrows lower and hear him whisper “HaShem.” The Name.

A small thing, perhaps, to a Jesus name…[Read more]

@livingwoodchronicles

*summersaults through window*

Oi there! I have been informed that you were back!

*Deep curtsey*

I’m still around, though life doesn’t allow me time enough to do much more than snoop. And appear on random conversations to insert…

Something.

Anyway, it’s good to see/hear(read?) you again. Hows Bramble?

@power

Ick…please don’t remind me of that.

@freedomwriter76 @smiley

Would one of y’all like to RP?

It KP acting really weird for anyone else? I can only access the forum via my notifications, and then only specific pages.

@overcomer

Ooo, I do prefer Ending Verse #4. It continues in the same voice as the preceding poem, while resolving the whole thing in a smooth switch of tone. (If that made any sense)

I think it would benefit from a little more structure, it need not be much more than you already have.

But that’s all according to the artist’s interpretation. It…[Read more]

@overcomer

Ooo, I like this poem.

I’m not the most amazing of a poet, but I’ll post any polishing I can think of in a bit.

Thanks for sharing!

AhA!! I have found it!

And now I consider.

*Thoughtful crickets*

Very nice. Are you going to share more soon? Because…

BWAHAHAHA

=)