Keilah H.

@keilah-h

I think this is very interesting! Love where you’re going with Torrent, Indy, and this mysterious cave of rebels. Beaumont sounds like he’s going to be a great side companion too, but what I find really neat about this is the involvement with Indy and the possibility of Torrent getting an alliance from these rebels to find her fat…[Read more]

@joy-caroline

Have you seen The Chosen? It’s quite good biblical fiction and does what you were saying with making the characters believable and have flaws and all that. It’s a great series about Christ’s disciples and the struggles they might have faced following him during the years of his ministry. It’s really cool, and they have two whole s…[Read more]

@elishavet-pidyon

That’s so cool! Whenever I try to draw anything like that, the eyes look so dead ;-; but that’s beautiful!

@trahia-the-minstrel

😉 *satisfied*

@keilah-h

Beaumont!! Cats are such good selling points for me xD

@everyone

Sorry for the late reply, I’ve had a busy couple of days.

@elishavet-pidyon

That picture is gorgeous! So cute! You’re a really good artist.😊 And I love Trumpkin.

@keilah-h

I love your main character’s name. I feel like the cat is an interesting character …😁 And I love that you have a character called Nyx too!

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@keilah-h

These dragons men are really cool sounding and must be a lot of fun to draw.

@maryg3 I can relate to the uneventful childhood! I was homeschooled and we lived remote. like, the nearest city with a Costco was 6 hrs, and people think an hour is nothing to go visit each other. And we only had one vehicle that my dad drove to work, so the only real social interaction with people was Sundays and the occasional church potluck.…[Read more]

@keilah-h,

Neat premise! I think it entirely depends on a ton of factors you haven’t told us. First, how old is Torrent? Nobody’s going to give a 12-16-year-old kid a bunch of backup for a rescue mission. (No offense to anyone in that age range; I’m 16 myself. I’m just sayin’ that you can’t put that in a book.) 17-18 is pushing it. On the other…[Read more]

@keilah-h You should end it the way you feel is the best — and sometimes you’ll change your mind😉. I once changed the true identity of an entire character because I decided it would be more emotionally impactful if he wasn’t related to someone else.

That said, the idea of her having to rescue her father on her own does sound interesting (I love…[Read more]

@keilah-h I’d never heard the word wyverns before — I’ll have to get up with the dragon lore. I love How to Train Your Dragon, but I’ve forgot which one was Stormfly. Was that Astrid’s dragon?

MandaloreWings sound cool😁

Are there any BabyYodaWings to go with a very certain type of MandaloreWing?

@keilah-h

That premise sounds interesting! I’m definitely leaning toward the resistance saying no to Torrent, I feel like that would make her have to come up with her own solutions, which would be interesting to read about. I’m also a big Rogue One fan, so…yeah. That might have something to do with my choice XD

@keilah-h

Ooh!!! Sounds so interesting already!!! Can’t wait to hear more honestly!!! I absolute love hearing premises like this (I’m working on a (hopefully Epic) fantasy series.

ooooh….this kinda makes me want to hear everyone else’s premises for their books….(I’m totally not trying to steal ur spotlight btw keilah)

but this story sound…[Read more]

@keilah-h

No … I can’t see it, sorry

@keilah-h

How fun! I love co-writing. 😀

No, you’re fine! It takes me a while to get back to people, so I get it. 🙂

@keilah-h

“Hello there.”

Nice😁 What type is a Singeprime? Also, you’ve made me super curious about the MandaloreWing now.😄

Also, I think the Stewjon Four-Wing is my favourite type of Star Wars dragon — cause what’s not to like?

@keilah-h Fun! You put a lot of thought into these. Good job 🙂

@keilah-h

I’ll keep that in mind😉 *Resolves to get first five books out of library*

@elishavet-pidyon

Thanks! I never knew that, about the early Slav federation. That’s so neat you’re using it in your book!😃

@keilah-h Brothers, am I right?😂 S’fine, my older brother loves to tease me about the name I made up in a Paper Mario fan fic of mine for a technological sphere that could be used like a super computer to destroy every world in the multi-world existence of my story — I called it…

DRUMROLL …

The S.D. Sphere.

Short of self-destruction sphere.…[Read more]

@keilah-h Thanks! I did see it, now you’re making me think I’ll have to try the Wings of Fire series😁

@koshka Thanks! That’s cool!

@keilah-h coolio!! Good job 🙂