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    Trahia the Minstrel
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      @elishavet-pidyon

      The รป? Do you know which culture it comes from? Also, thatโ€™s epic youโ€™re learning Hebrew!? I watched some beginnersโ€™ videos to learn the structure โ€” in terms of it being an SVO language, like English. Unlike my main kingdomโ€™s language, which is an SOV language, like Japanese.

      I like the mix of cultures youโ€™re using for Eirtan! Iโ€™ve never even heard of Kievan Rus. Where is it?

      Yeah, the language of my desert kingdom, is Hebrew-based, and some of the marriage customs are Hebrew-based as well, along with some ancient Iranian marriage customs.

      Among the musical instruments, ouds and Arabian drums are predominant.

      In terms of the culture, itโ€™s an odd mix of Jewish customs, made-up customs, and Muslim customs โ€” by which I mean all the girls are expected to wear veils in public. Maybe. Iโ€™m still deciding whether my whole culture has to wear veils if theyโ€™re woman, or maybe only the Princess?

      The architecture of Alโ€™chatamet, the capital, is based on Jerusalem, Tashbaan from Narnia, and basically those old Persian cities that had the multiple levels. Alโ€™chatamet has three levels: Upper City, Middle City, and Lower City. Each of these levels are divided into quarters, like Bazaar Quarter, Tannerโ€™s Quarter, Silk Quarter, etc. At the very peak is the royal palace. The whole city is situated beside and around the biggest oasis in the desert โ€” itโ€™s practically a lake.

      It is a merchant and trading city first and foremost โ€” thatโ€™s why thereโ€™s so many quarters, for all the different artisans.

      In terms of dance, I referenced several dances, including Iranian, Yemen, Oman, Iraqi, Turkish, etc. (I think. It was so long ago now Iโ€™ve kinda forgotten what specific dances I watched, from what cultures)

      In terms of food, expect Eggplant to be the most perfected and preferred ย delicacy.

      Hope you enjoyed this long ramble on the background of my culture, as much I as could remember off the top of my head!??

      The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
      Thatโ€™s my wish to create.

      #106402
      Keilah H.
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        @trahia-the-minstrel I do the same! You’re one of the ones on my Dragon Lore topic, so you’ll see when I post multitudinous facts about half-man, half-dragon cultures.

        Gerald handled that. You donโ€™t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

        #106403
        Keilah H.
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          @lydia-s Thanks! Rinzler is actually my brother’s character, but we worked on his story together. Sorry for the late reply!

          Gerald handled that. You donโ€™t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

          #106406
          Koshka
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            @trahia-the-minstrel

            Oh, oh, your names are lovely. Hebrew? My sister is learning Hebrew!


            @elfwing

            Your lines are great! I like Faeda, being short myself. And is Tyroll her older, or younger brother?

            A cup of tea is cheaper than therapy.

            #106408
            Trahia the Minstrel
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              @keilah-h Thanks! I did see it, now youโ€™re making me think Iโ€™ll have to try the Wings of Fire series? Also, itโ€™s just cool that youโ€™re writing Star Wars fan fic. I think thatโ€™s epic and awesome!?


              @koshka
              Thanks! Thatโ€™s cool!

              The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
              Thatโ€™s my wish to create.

              #106410
              Elishavet Elroi
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                @trahia-the-minstrel

                Oh, I love building cultures and hearing what other people have made!

                Let’s see… I don’t know the รบ sound, it might be Hebrew (I’m not very far in).

                Keivan Rus is basically the name of a federation of Slavs in the 9th to the mid 13th century. The part I mixed in is mostly from the older northern groups. They were a nuisance to the Romans.

                I love your desert culture, it sounds wonderful.

                Still a ChaosGremlinโ„ข on the inside.

                #106412
                Keilah H.
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                  @trahia-the-minstrel You’re welcome. I love writing Star Wars fanfics, especially dragon ones! And a word on Wings of Fire–the later books aren’t as good as the first five. Those are the best.

                  Gerald handled that. You donโ€™t question Gerald. (if you know you know)

                  #106414
                  Trahia the Minstrel
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                    @keilah-h

                    Iโ€™ll keep that in mind? *Resolves to get first five books out of library*


                    @elishavet-pidyon

                    Thanks! I never knew that, about the early Slav federation. Thatโ€™s so neat youโ€™re using it in your book!?

                    The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
                    Thatโ€™s my wish to create.

                    #106415
                    Elishavet Elroi
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                      Thanks! It’ll be interesting to watch play out.

                      Also, about your culture, Horse and His Boy was always a favorite in our house. I can hardly run across hot pavement without thinking about Tashbaan. I love that you’re including the oud, which I only discovered the other day. About the veils, I know very little except what one might find in early Christain Britain. There they were worn by married/older women and bare hair was a mark of youth/girlhood. (Not that that helps you any)

                      Anyway, it sounds so fun!

                      Still a ChaosGremlinโ„ข on the inside.

                      #106416
                      Elishavet Elroi
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                        *note: to clarify my ambiguous “letter”. I meant ื› and ื—. Both make a throaty sound.

                        Still a ChaosGremlinโ„ข on the inside.

                        #106417
                        Trahia the Minstrel
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                          @elishavet-pidyon

                          The Horse and His Boy is my favourite Narnia book?.

                          Yeah, I havenโ€™t learnt the Hebrew letters, but that โ€˜chaโ€™ sound is really hard to make. Still, I like the feel it gives my language?. Hereโ€™s a sample:

                          โ€œร›ne liโ€™hatevet Fรฉrฤซjinar Sechol.โ€

                          (translation: I donโ€™t speak Fรฉrฤซjinarian (language))

                          โ€œIra? Hรปsฤซ hovet Ira?โ€

                          (translation: Mother? Where is Mother?โ€)

                          I think I may have botched the first one, cause I didnโ€™t reference my work to know. But you get the general idea.?

                          The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
                          Thatโ€™s my wish to create.

                          #106418
                          Elishavet Elroi
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                            @trahia-the-minstrel

                            Yes, and it sounds so good. Will you have a glossary?

                            Still a ChaosGremlinโ„ข on the inside.

                            #106419
                            Trahia the Minstrel
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                              @elishavet-pidyon

                              Like, that explains all my foreign words and phases? That could be a good idea?โ€ฆ

                              The end of a story, a beautiful picture; a feeling of longing yet hope~
                              Thatโ€™s my wish to create.

                              #106425
                              Anatra
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                                @trahia-the-minstrel

                                I’ll pray you’re not in the waiting stage for too long! I’ve heard that can be stressful ๐Ÿ™‚


                                @elfwing

                                Those characters always make me smile.ย Ah, yes. Rebel Faeada XD

                                #106491
                                Elfwing
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                                  @elishavet-pidyon Thanks!


                                  @koshka
                                  Thanks!! Tyroll is younger brother ๐Ÿ™‚


                                  @anatra23
                                  hehehe thanks ๐Ÿ˜‰ yep, she be rebel

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