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Jenna Terese replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
I REALLY like your tag lines! The synopsis is good too; my one suggestion would be to briefly mention why the main character and her friend are being sent off to this circus land. But great job! 😀
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Lin replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@godlyfantasy12 Oh wow, I love yours! Especially that last tagline! Thank you for starting this topic!
@issawriter7 Girl, I love yours as well! And I love your second tagline!
*rubs hands* Time to make up things on the spot…oh wait, here’s a thing I had from months ago…
You know what? This would be fun for some of my already completed…[Read more]
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Hmmm… I think a mix of both sounds really cool!!
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
Awwww, girl, THANK YOU SOOO MUCH!!!! I’m soo glad to hear that!!! 😊 Girl, you are SO very welcome!!!! <33
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Issabelle Perry replied to the topic Synopsis and Taglines! in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
WHOA, girl, THAT SYNOPSIS JUST SOUNDS SOOOO AMAZING AND INTRIGUING!!!!!! Like if this book was in a bookstore, I would TOTALLY buy it and read it!!!! If you want, maybe you could give a little more of an idea who the villain is and what the main conflict of the story’s gonna be. But either way, I still ADORE it soooooo much!!!!!…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Not sure if I should add an idea to my book in the forum Novel Idea Critiques 5 years, 3 months ago
@morgan If it fixes your plot holes, I’d say go for it!
I think that adding another sibling could help strengthen your theme, as others have said before, you could probably work around with fleshing some of your characters out. And if you’re writing a sequel, I think that if there is a problem that arises in this book then it could be resolved in…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@relia Ah, I’ve been meaning to check out Les Miserables! It’s so long though….ah….
Ah yes, LOTR. And I’ve read the Hunger Games trilogy a long time ago. And yes, Star Wars is quite excellent. The new ones are…not. Who are your favorite characters from these?
Le gasp. Heresy? Oh word…
Oh, I’ll have to check out that movie! It sounds…[Read more]
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Natalie C. replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@relia Thank you SO MUCH for liking Loki! My friends think I’m crazy for liking him, but I think they’re crazy for not, so we’re even.
I’m Natalie and you sound super fun! I really like LotR too, and I may or may not have started laughing hysterically at your Gollum impression XD. Also Star Wars, and no, the new ones are not good. I like the new…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic goodbye (because saying hullo is too normal) in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@relia Hi and welcome! We’re so happy that you’re here! This community is indeed full of fun and awesome people. I like you already XD
I see you love classic lit! What are some of your favorite works?
I see you like to fangirl… What are some fandoms that you’re part of?
Do you like pineapple on pizza?
Do you have any favorite movies?
Aye,…[Read more]
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Lin replied to the topic Hi! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@sami-eastwood Hi Sami! Welcome to the Kingdom! I’m Linyang, though most here just call me Lin. It’s a pleasure to make your acquaintance! If you don’t mind I’m going to drill you with some questions (as I do with all newcomers) to get to know you better.
What’s your current WIP about? What stage are you at with it right now?
What are some of…[Read more]
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Elfwing replied to the topic Take the three main characters of a recent story you wrote and… in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
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Kads replied to the topic Short Story Contest in the forum General Writing Discussions 5 years, 3 months ago
@gracie-j Katherine tagged me, I believe, but… I already entered. XDDD
And that forum signature is just- yes. Yes, yes, yes.
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Take the three main characters of a recent story you wrote and… in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
This is such a cool topic! I would choose Tess, Rowan, and Connor.
Rowan (MC) is a prince that was supposedly killed as a toddler. His oldest brother, the king, wanted him dead so he wouldn’t have rivals, but he also needed him alive in case he died without leaving an heir. So he let Rowan live, but never told anyone who he was. R…[Read more]
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Natalie C. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
@morgan Ooh, living on a farm sounds like so much fun! We have one cat inside, two or three that we feed outside, and sometimes we foster kittens.
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hi everyone! So excited to be a part of this:) in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
Oh, dear, I am very, very late, but welcome to the KP forum! I’m Lydia.
Poetry is a lot of fun to write! I don’t devote much time to it, but I do occasionally dabble in it. What are your usual subjects?
I’m guessing most of my usual questions have already been asked, so I’ll have to deviate from my pattern. 😉
1) Who is your all-time…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Hello! in the forum Start HERE 5 years, 3 months ago
1) Those are lovely choices! I love them both. Centaurs are the best (Inner Narnia fan kicks on😉)
2) Oh my goodness, it’s been a long time since I’ve thought about that character! He’s a ton of fun.
3) Yes, Peter is awesome! I have trouble choosing between the four myself, especially if we’re talking about the movie characters. They all…[Read more]
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Lydia S. replied to the topic Take the three main characters of a recent story you wrote and… in the forum Topic of the Week 5 years, 3 months ago
Oh, dear.. Which WIP do I choose? Hmmm… Okay, let’s go with the one that’s based on three of Jane Austen’s novels (writing it with a friend). My storyline is based on Persuasion, my personal favorite of Austen’s novels.
Anne Elliot – A quiet, sensitive, deep-thinking woman who is constantly haunted by a secret buried in her past.…[Read more]
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