Kate Flournoy

@kaya-young  Wow, thank you so much!  I can definitely post the entire book if you want.

Well, I have not completed any other full books, but the sequel to the one you’re reading now is in the works and I also have a Superhero WIP along with some short stories/novelettes.  🙂 🙂

@seekjustice @rochellaine @catwing

anyone on? I’m on early because my mom is on the math computer, and so I don’t have anything to do.

@jenwriter17  The whole book is written, I just don’t want to overwhelm anyone with critiquing the entire story…unless you want to.  🙂

To those of you who are interested, here are the next two chapters of the book.  I’m pretty sure the fourth chapter is kinda confusing, so if you’d give me some pointers there I’d appreciate it!

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1-jzVzEBjTyvq5vKUBAGZ-0Lt4-_bWLJw1Uofs_59wmQ/edit

@jenwriter17 @kaya-young

Woah, no idea what happened to that first picture.  *scratches head*

And here are the pics…

So I found this the other day…

I wrote it when I was seven and the spelling is just horrible.  *facepalm*

I’ll write out the story since it’s hardly legible (and I’ll fix the spelling and grammar mistakes):

Once upon a time there lived a cat.  Now this cat was not an ordinary cat.  The cat has lost a leg.  The cat’s name was Pretty. 

There w…[Read more]

@catwing  I’m still developing her superpower but she can camouflage herself to blend in with anything.  🙂

@rochellaine

Oh, yes, I did find a cupcake. It was really nice too. 😛

@rochellaine

Okay good night (or good morning really!)

I’m just going to leave it for now, I have plenty of other editing to do, I’ll work something out sooner or later.

@rochellaine

Ah no, I hadn’t got that post. That explains everything 🙂

No, I have no solutions. It’s driving me crazy. I’m going to see if I can find a cupcake, because I’m sure that will make me feel better.

@rochellaine

I had been right. There was the sniper, only two meters away. I opened my mouth, let out an almighty scream and then put my hand over the muzzle of the rifle.

She purposefully puts her hand over the gun. I guess she could get shot accidentally though.

The other thing is: why was she there in the first place? Delivering a letter to…[Read more]

@rochellaine

Ah, copyright…the death of bloggers everywhere. not that I don’t appreciate copyright, but you know…it is annoying.

Okay, so at the end of Stars, Sapphire dies, you know that, and she dies because she purposefully places herself in front of Justice. Now, the problem I’m seeing here is that for the past two years Sapphire has l…[Read more]

@rochellaine

I was just about to ask you if you were back yet. How’s it going? are you willing to talk through a plothole with me?

@catwing Okay, goodnight!

@catwing Oh well then, your lucky 🙂 I can imagine that they’d get tangled up though! I’m tangled in plot holes at the moment *groans and headdesks*

@catwing

Ah, I’m terrible at show don’t tell! And passive voice…urgh!

I have to delete a few characters from my WIP since there’s so many and quite a few are redundant. still, they’re my babies and I love them. I’m sad to see them go 🙁

@catwing Cool! How’s it going?

@alia Goodnight (feel better tomorrow!)

@catwing What are you editing?

@catwing, @seekjustice, I disappeared to have dinner, and now (because I don’t feel well) am going to bed